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Exotic Lands

Exotic Lands
by Lori Maria Walton

The day,
nurtured in the belly of a 
  fearless night
turns and is finally born
clinging to the soft arms of a 
  pretty morning

The sun, dozing on the 
heavy chest of exotic lands,
  rolls
and is now awakened,
plowing a submissive face 
  with golden hands

Play the bagpipes,
while the tea and the toast and
  freshly squeezed orange juice
seated spellbound
wait anxiously for the first touch
of honey lips

This day, as the morning 
waits on the table for the first
  touch of honey 
hands and golden lips prepare
to explore the shores of life

Blended melodies ring 
  in attentive hollows
beneath the sea of passion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/20/2014 9:01:00 AM
The images you spell out! :) I truly enjoy this, you are great with metaphors, they don't seem "over-used' nor "old" . I will be looking forward to read more from you!
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Lori Maria Walton
Date: 9/20/2014 9:04:00 AM
You are kind.. thanks for the encouragement..

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