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'And on that night you will tell your son, saying: On account of this that the Lord did for me in my going forth from Egypt.'  Exodus 13:8

Imagine it today a rag-tag procession two-three million souls advancing northward Mt. Sinai their goal A bearded prophet leading the way leaning on the staff he waved yesterday When lice swarmed down, locusts, hail Egyptian first-born at midnight dead Pharaoh sent forth a wail his subjects in mortal dread Israel reached the Sea her joy turned wary trapped ‘tween it and Pharaoh’s pursuing army Then brave Nachshon of Yehuda’s tribe walked into the waves setting the vibe The waves parted the sea split Their path charted Israel passed through... You may not believe me ~ but I was there too

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Date: 4/22/2025 10:17:00 PM
It was God through Moses that was able to make that happen wow when you think about all they had to overcome. How do a million or more people hear you when Moses gave an order?
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Date: 4/13/2025 4:08:00 PM
My Gershon..Yet you don't look a day over the Millenium, I hope you don't mind such flattery As it were? Also with poems like this i do concur All blessings also.'
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Date: 4/13/2025 6:14:00 AM
Powerful and stirring poem on the Exodus and parting of the Red Sea by God through Moses. Passover blessings to you and your family good friend. A FAV for sure. ~
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Date: 4/12/2025 6:33:00 AM
Very vivid, thrilling...yep, you were definitely there! God is faithful to his people.
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Date: 4/11/2025 11:53:00 AM
In seed, indeed!
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Date: 4/10/2025 5:45:00 PM
Well said Gershon. Your Passover tribute is powerful
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Date: 4/10/2025 6:40:00 AM
Great job! Love how you tell us this story with poetic grace!
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Date: 4/9/2025 4:27:00 PM
profound lines highlight this poesy, gershon...yes you were there in spirit, in faith, and more... i enjoyed the last lines! soupie for you
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/9/2025 5:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Nette. I admire your poetic gift greatly, so it's special for me when you write kindly of my efforts... And apologies for the 'oops' on my first soup mail tonight. :) Gershon

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