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I took my date to see Mick Jagger 

But later she started to stagger

Said "I have some bad news"

Then she puked on my shoes

So I just decided to bagger
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Brotherton Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 7:36 PM
True love indeed.
Freie Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Jerry, I appreciate the positive feedback.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 4:35 AM
Either a great memory of the beginnings of love or a bad date memory…lol!
Freie Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Hi Kim, I guess if you still want to see someone after they puke on your shoes, maybe it's the beginning of love. Or signs that only a gifted psychiatrist could spot. Thanks again my friend.
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