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poem submitted to "Pick A Title" poetry contest, Edward Ibeh, sponsor, May 16, 2026.

EXISTENTIAL UNCERTAINTY

Existential uncertainty
arrives like a question older
than the body carrying it~
a quiet inquiry rising
from the marrow’s dim archive,
asking “what does it mean
to move through a world
that never stops shifting?”

Light tries to reason with shadow,
but shadow answers
with yet another riddle,
reminding me that clarity
is just a temporary visitor
and doubt is the more
faithful companion.

Some days the self feels fixed,
a point on a map
I can almost name;
other days it dissolves
into a constellation of maybes,
each star a possibility
I cannot fully claim.

And still~
something in me listens
for the logic beneath the chaos,
the tenuous geometry of purpose
obscured in the noise.

I step anyway,
realizing the path is shaped
as much by my questions
as by my steps,
understanding the unknown
is not my enemy
but a horizon.

Uncertainty remains,
it becomes my teacher~
one that asks me
to live without definitive answers,
to let meaning be something
I participate in
rather than discover.
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June 11, 2026 at 9:35 AM
This is an insightful exploration of life's intricacies and humanity's ultimate objective, dear Sara. My sincere congratulations on your win in this contest.
George Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 8:56 PM
"Uncertainty remains, it becomes my teacher~ one that asks me to live without definitive answers,". Your poem is deeply philosophical. We have no clear cut answers to the puzzling questions of life. But without definitive answers, we sail through life guided by our intuitions. In a way it helps deeper introspection and leads to better solutions. Congratulations dear Sara on your great win.
Ibeh Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 10:41 AM
A truly amazing poem, Sara. The 2nd stanza is a thing of beauty! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
Hind Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 6:32 PM
made me think, sometimes I get this feeling...
Gauthier Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:02 AM
Beautiful introspective piece ~
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