existential awareness

existential awareness existential thought selfishly reminding me breathe in – breathe out John G. Lawless 6/20/2015 submitted to – Senryu on Your Own Existence sponsor – Marvin Celestial

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2015 9:00:00 AM

Our existence can be summed up in the breaths we take. For me this is one of my personal favorites.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2015 10:48:00 PM

Congrats on ur winning senryu John!

SKAT A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:54:00 PM

JOHN, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:29:00 PM

John, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 5:04:00 PM

I am amazed some of the really good ones down here in HM land. Love this one seeing it again!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/3/2015 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Pandita SieteSantos

Date: 7/3/2015 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win, John! This superb Senryu reminds me not to take life for granted but to cherish each breath I take! All the best to you. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 3:41:00 PM

very cool!!! BY THE WAY, can you tell me the downside of the reusable bags? Besides the fact that they are packaged ? It seems in the long run, they still have to be better than all the plastic, right? Just curious. you were the second person to make that comment about them.

JAN ALLISON

Date: 6/19/2015 6:53:00 AM

VERY clever Senryu John - I was thinking along the same lines lol - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx