Aiyah Torres Poet Senryu

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Existence - Be Happy

painting life's portrait
                       smiling faces on earth
                         barefoot happy kid.

               
                          read mom's story
                  before eyes close and journey
                        lives forever young.

                         love so tenderly
               heart filled with our memories
                       happiness reveals.

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Lynn Marie February 22, 2017 at 12:28 AM ..This is just magical aiyah:-) Beautiful writing, lovely to read :-) blessings, lynn

Len Gasun January 8, 2016 at 8:11 PM I'm so glad to read one of your precious gems this morning my very dear friend, Aiyah! I'm so glad to see you on my poem today. Thank you so much. Hope and pray, you're always doing well. Take care always! love lots, Leonora

Nette Onclaud August 4, 2015 at 3:38 PM ohh, your winsome, happy write delights, aiyah!.. well done!.. huggs

Emile Pinet July 31, 2015 at 12:17 PM The imagery and shear beauty of your words are impressively seasoned by your talent and fill the heart with their magic. Emile.

Teddy Kimathi July 31, 2015 at 10:30 AM Congrats for your wonderful, winning poem Aiyah! ^_^

Richard Lamoureux July 31, 2015 at 8:52 AM These are indeed happy thoughts, congratulations.

James Inman July 31, 2015 at 8:31 AM Lovely bittersweet write. Fills me with memories.

Casarah Nance July 31, 2015 at 7:41 AM You happy fills me with happiness.. :)

Skat A July 31, 2015 at 1:22 AM lovely win. SKAT

Viv Wigley July 31, 2015 at 12:05 AM Lovely work, Aiyah, well done, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 30, 2015 at 11:25 PM Congrats on ur brilliant winning poem Aiyah! Great uplifting work!

Kp Nunez July 28, 2015 at 8:07 PM Deeelightful string! You do paint beautiful life images, Aiyah. Yeah! ...galing-galing! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2015 at 3:43 AM - This is a pleasure to read, my friend Aiyah ..... so encouraging and playful .... beautiful - (7!!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie July 27, 2015 at 9:34 PM admiration from this beholder much respect from this man due encouragement to keep it going I am indeed your newest fan...;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 10:27 AM Aiyah, galing naman!!! Love all but my fave last one!~Olive Eloisa :D!

Afolabi Muideen July 26, 2015 at 11:52 PM This piece is so intriguing, as so much to read this..........A.M.

Richard Lamoureux July 26, 2015 at 1:37 PM My comment was an observation not a criticism. Some endings are sad. Personally I think version one is best because that was what you felt when writing. Don't let a comment colour your art. Hugs Rick Aiyah Torres July 27, 2015 at 8:39 PM no Rick.. it added more color to my work.. good criticism helps a lot! :) Thank you ^_^

Richard Lamoureux July 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM Beautiful but with a sad ending. Aiyah Torres July 26, 2015 at 10:26 AM yes you're right! There should be a happy ending! :)thanks! Aiyah Torres July 26, 2015 at 10:24 AM Thank you ,Ric for visiting my land once more :O)) Glad to see your comment back in my poem !! ^_^

Afolabi Muideen July 26, 2015 at 4:03 AM An excellence penned, I love your write.........A.M.

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 2:22 AM love your write on existence, enjoyed your senryu ~S.K.A.T. Aiyah Torres July 26, 2015 at 10:28 AM thanks Skat for supporting my poem!! :O)

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 5:16 PM what a wonderful string of senryu - the final one I find so so touching Aiyah:-) hugs Jan xx 7 Aiyah Torres July 26, 2015 at 10:28 AM Thanks Jan !! :O0