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Existence

"the earth's dark veil slivered the heaven's, crimson shadows birthed the moon" Kristin Palm Existence "the earth's dark veil slivered the heavens, crimson shadows birthed the moon" into a thousand crescents Every prayer, ever uttered was written in the dust of these forsaken ravines Oceans flung their waters into the wide heavens of man's total Regret There in the silent void of consequence the hidden forces of Creation met to silently knit each shattered Atom of beauty into existence again Suzanne Delaney

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Date: 9/1/2014 7:23:00 PM
Tremendous account of the rebirth, the rising...congrats Tim
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Date: 8/30/2014 7:57:00 AM
I enjoyed the write on rebirth, Suzanne. congrats
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:45:00 PM
OH MY, this is a GREAT poem, like many others I remember of yours from the past. BIG congrats on a very well deserved win. FAVE
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:06:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this, Suzzane,, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:45:00 AM
Wow suz this is and outstanding take on the prompt. One of the best I've read so far. It sounds like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie.
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Date: 6/30/2013 7:42:00 PM
Suz, a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 6/30/2013 6:43:00 AM
A writing created by a "phoenix" of the mind. Tremendous!
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Date: 6/29/2013 5:30:00 PM
devastation to rebirth beautifully covered in this superb poem Shadow x smiles
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