Gary Fields Poet Pastoral

Existence

Abstinence come's
    To full closure
With-in the confines'
            - Of -
  The human mind
     Only to unleash
         A prelude
Which precede the gift
           - Of -
     Time

               GF

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Mohammad Taha Effendi September 15, 2011 at 11:57 PM Philosophical and poetic! And very profound use of expressions I must add. I enjoyed reading your poem today Gary. Blessings, Taha. Gary Fields September 16, 2011 at 6:38 AM Thank you for enjoying the lines...you are not so bad yourself...your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS