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Exhortation Iv

Courtesan rays slip through saffron robes undaunted countenance persists past spuriously puffed up wares burying a man alive Protect me from this sea drown out in apprehension unscrupulously seizing me Engulf me in a mere chestnut gloss where the specters lie in wake loop your thrum against my form and pleasure you may take °as the night rests so shall we and in morning a love will rise

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Date: 8/20/2017 6:12:00 AM
If I have a preference, it's stanza 3... But I love all of this beautiful poem, Tim :)
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Date: 8/19/2017 3:49:00 PM
- Always a sense of love - Gorgeous written, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2017 10:02:00 AM
gentle pacing of love 's awakening.. pleasure to read you, tim... marvelous!..huggs
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:08:00 AM
I really loved this incredible write this morning! You have surely delighted me by its amazing flair! What an excellent and extremely lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/18/2017 10:42:00 PM
Wow Tim. This is powerful and I really enjoyed it. -- Dean
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Date: 8/18/2017 9:23:00 PM
Yes I love the second verse too. But then since when do I not love your work. I enjoy and love them all :)
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Date: 8/18/2017 10:28:00 AM
Second verse is a strong exhortation, Tim.
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