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Rapidly down the mountainside, The pure powdery snow spraying! Nearer to vast sapphire skies, And long ere a perplexed purple. Bracing winds travel from afar, And carelessly tousle the hair, Long after the mists of orange, In the treasured golden noon, On the other side of the moon! Enormous speeds are attained, As wild laughter is trailing, Like a first trip on ocean blue, And the view from the railing. Side to side in and out of trees, Snow sprinkled, sunlit emeralds. This could be the meaning of free, Racing the wind no cares behind me!

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Date: 1/5/2021 6:27:00 PM
Wow! This is a superb skiing poem. I'm not a snow or a winter or a winter sports fan, but your poem does it for me. If I were younger, I might buy some skis! Thanks, Evelyn! Free as a Bird, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2021 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your enthusiastic response, Gershon. Some people see snow and build a snowman. But I wanted to write a fun, action poem. On the Wings of Winter, Evelyn
Date: 1/4/2021 10:56:00 PM
You took me on a trip to wonderland and am grateful for it. Lovely scenery. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/5/2021 10:00:00 AM
I was so happy to be your guide. Thanks for your appreciation. :=)

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