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Exhilarate Me

Press me from behind My back to your chest Your flesh between my thighs Exhilarate me Watch my blush rise From my breast Up my long neck My face glows The solidness of you Fills up the substance of me

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Maxeen Dennis

Date: 2/12/2012 11:22:00 AM

Hot!

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 2/1/2012 2:07:00 AM

Nicely done,great writing Michele!oxox Laila

Michele Ortiz
Date: 2/1/2012 8:12:00 AM

Thank you :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2012 6:28:00 AM

Michele,wery well written. love Anne-Lise

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 6:29:00 AM

Good! I was trying to create a visual without being vulgar. Just simply describe a passionate moment. I'm glad you liked it :)

Joe Flach

Date: 1/30/2012 3:52:00 PM

Well, that poem certainly did exhilarate me. Nicely done, Michele.

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 6:31:00 AM

It "exhilarated" me too when I wrote it :) Thank you for the comment!

Shirley Long

Date: 1/30/2012 2:15:00 PM

Great poem with much feeling being expressed. it enchances the reader mind.

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/30/2012 2:39:00 PM

Thank you - I'm so glad you could sense the feeling behind this :)