Michele Ortiz Poet Free verse

Exhilarate Me

Press me from behind

My back to your chest

Your flesh between my thighs

Exhilarate me

Watch my blush rise

From my breast 

Up my long neck

My face glows

The solidness of you

Fills up the substance of me

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Maxeen Dennis February 12, 2012 at 11:22 AM Hot!

Laila Andresen Mjelde February 1, 2012 at 2:07 AM Nicely done,great writing Michele!oxox Laila Michele Ortiz February 1, 2012 at 8:12 AM Thank you :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2012 at 6:28 AM Michele,wery well written. love Anne-Lise Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 6:29 AM Good! I was trying to create a visual without being vulgar. Just simply describe a passionate moment. I'm glad you liked it :)

Joe Flach January 30, 2012 at 3:52 PM Well, that poem certainly did exhilarate me. Nicely done, Michele. Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 6:31 AM It "exhilarated" me too when I wrote it :) Thank you for the comment!

Shirley Long January 30, 2012 at 2:15 PM Great poem with much feeling being expressed. it enchances the reader mind. Michele Ortiz January 30, 2012 at 2:39 PM Thank you - I'm so glad you could sense the feeling behind this :)