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I saw the Sun and the Moon take a stance in the universe. And an unknown Star placed over them was put in charge. The whole entire inhabitants scattered themselves at large. And all the lands and seas became separated by a diverse. The Sun Shined brightly in the west never to set in a curse. The Moon gleamed fully bright to the east as the surcharge. The door had been widely opened and many came by barge. The stress was great because the world went into a reverse. Fate and destiny was being dished out like a deck of cards. Skies lit up and the Stars came back out like never before. And the palm trees took up to the seas like standing guards. And from this stemmed growth from that one opened door. The Sun and Moon are exalted above and beyond you all, And so is the Star in charge of those that flaw in its thrall. ® Registered: Ann Rich 2008

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Date: 5/24/2009 9:16:00 AM
I like the way you describe the planets of the universe. it is amazing the way they carry out their duties. Watching the sun rise in the east and go all the way thru to set in the west, and all the nature is mind boggling. Something to think about. This is what we need to do in this society that can be busy and overwhelming. another great write. Abe
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