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Exhaling

A slice of skin let's begin the journey journeying where the mind may be at rest peace in time time with mind never concludes properly I've never been a proper person all that is right is there a slight chance? before I explode I exhale.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/21/2008 11:38:00 AM
Riveting with strong, emotional content... again, your final line is most effective. (suggestion: 'let me' instead of 'let's' in your second line, since it's a first person poem) Best wishes, Keith
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