'exhale'
realization hit me
it was never about him
the controls were in my hand
reverie was mine
I had to take it
try and alter the ending
starting with my heart
my thoughts became mine again
I could finally exhale
(Dodoitsu & Tanka)
Inspired by Russell’s Sivey’s contest:
“A Mesh of Forms”
Written by Wilma Neels
Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2012
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