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Excuse Me

Excuse me, I can’t see past your shoulder. You should be hot you see, yet you grow colder; long burning embers smolder. And on this day, one year older, I’ve come to say, nothing but a simple hey; in hopes that, you just may, take me back. I cannot think of anyone, I’d rather love, than you, my sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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