Excitement

I want some excitement in my life, 
Other than just day dreaming all my life. 
Thinking about the past days, 
Where trust was the biggest maze. 

Now all I can think about is my past fallacy, 
When I thought friendship was easy . 
When I thought life would be simple, 
When I thought solution could easily be kindled. 

Though not everyone can have a life of Tom Sawyer and Nancy Drew, 
So stay strong and learn something new. 
Follow your dreams too, 
And excitement will come running to you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Callus Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Making plans for the future and having the fortune to see them come true, will definitely fill you with positive exciting vibes, Komal. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul
Walimbe Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 1:06 AM
Yes Paul...Just waiting for that moment! Really glad seeing you here again! Thank you for your comment! Have a great Day!!:)
Horsman Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 1:21 AM
Love your enlightening poem, Komal.
Walimbe Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 5:07 AM
Thank you for your kind reply Harry...Joy and blessings!:)
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 8:17 PM
'Learn something new!' Keep moving forward, Komal, and keep smiling! Joy and Light! ~ Gershon
Walimbe Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 1:15 AM
Thank you for your kind visit! Have a great day! Joy and light to you too:)
Deo Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 2:24 AM
Yes, Komal (LOTUS, in India?) Its a beautiful name, and beautiful, honest poem. Do NOT chase excitement, chase the Ways of LIGHT. Then LOVE, and Peace/shanthi (or Shalom as Jesus taught it) will be yours too. THats what I learned from the Bible, but was a Hindu til 1990.
Walimbe Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 2:32 AM
Komal means soft and delicate ,and Kamal means Lotus :), thank you so much for your kind reply! Yes, I do agree with you! Glad you liked it!
Mcconnell Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Lovely piece on excitement Komal, with great imagery and insightfulness. Hope all is well with you, take care always, Gordon
Walimbe Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 10:42 PM
Thank you for commenting! Glad you liked it! Yes, have a great day :)
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