Excited

I am alive
awake
and aware.

I look around
intent
and watchful.

I am with it
conscious
and sensitive.

I am thinking
turning
and feeling.

I am in and out
moving
and with it so far!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 11, 2015 at 3:05 AM
JAMES :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 1:14 AM
this is very light poem with so sweet sets.. :)!
Ranahan Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:00 PM
i feel light and long for deeper lightness.
Yvonne Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Nice!
Ranahan Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Nice of you to say. Thanks, Jim
Fleming Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 2:02 AM
An interesting little poem. Starts with energy in its excited (higher) state, and slowly drops down to its (lower) normal unexcited mode. :) john.
Ranahan Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 10:09 PM
I had no idea that was happening. I'm with it. Thanks. jim
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