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Eating sugary foods each day is known to cause enamel damage; so ensure you brush your teeth! Eroded teeth can give excruciating pain … extraction could follow! Pleiades E contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman Checked with how many syllables 09~17~16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:07:00 PM

VERY cleverly done, Jan. ME LIKES> Congratulations. HA the caption is EEE an EXCESS of E's

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2016 12:41:00 PM

ha ha ha I love captchas that are topical to the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/23/2016 8:21:00 AM

Good one, Jan! Congratulations! ...Fran

Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2016 4:29:00 PM

May thanks Francis:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/23/2016 5:37:00 AM

Such an educative poem..I think this is appropriate for kids in classroom. (a sure gift to your dentist...ha ha ha)Love it!:)Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2016 4:29:00 PM

I will give her a copy for the dental surgery notice board:-) hugs jan xx

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/22/2016 2:39:00 PM

How to get kids hooked on brushing: if they brush well, we will read them poetry... Good stuff, Kai

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 2:47:00 PM

Thanks Kia:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2016 2:28:00 PM

You are right, Jan, but then dentists would be out of a job:) I like the smooth flow of your Pleiades; I believe that this form needs to flow freely, otherwise it flops. Well done and congratulations! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 2:46:00 PM

I've posted 2 for the 'f' pleiades but the contest isn't posted yet - but I couldn't resist lol:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2016 1:31:00 PM

Ha! This is so true, Jan! Congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 2:45:00 PM

Thanks Laura:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2016 12:19:00 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 12:36:00 PM

I try to do the same especially if I have participated in the contest but do put a general congrats on the page if the sponsor does a blog - got a lot of catching up to do today:-) love your emerald poem I love green:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 9/22/2016 9:13:00 AM

haha,I hate dentists too:)Congrats Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 12:37:00 PM

It doesn't bother me now but I used to be terrified!:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/22/2016 8:47:00 AM

Jan I know this feeling all too well! congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 9/22/2016 12:01:00 AM

A good lesson for my 6 year old daughter that's for sure - well deserved place Jan Regards, Mark

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/21/2016 10:50:00 PM

Coming back to say Congrats, Jan! Agnes

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2016 2:21:00 AM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/21/2016 6:49:00 PM

What a great commercial this would make to help people take better care of their teeth, Jan! Love it, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 6:51:00 PM

I will have to take a copy down to the dentist:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/21/2016 6:35:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 6:50:00 PM

Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2016 5:38:00 PM

Jan, very wise advice in your cute, light-hearted write! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2016 5:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim I have such fun writing this form I have another 'e' poem to post some time:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/18/2016 4:05:00 PM

This one had me chuckle. We should pair this up with my Dessert pleiades; they would complement each other well ;) Good luck with the contest. Agnes

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2016 5:44:00 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx