'exceptional,' His Benchmark

Integrity, his middle name
    'Tops' was his trademark
  Scrupulous in all he did
    'Exceptional,' his benchmark

  Low maintenance for every boss he'd had
    Beloved of his Mom and Dad
  When he married the girl next door
    They cut a rug on the banquet floor...

  Two years later, their marriage shattered
    His wife's emotions lay in tatters
  All she'd wanted was affection ~
    All he demanded was perfection
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Tor Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 10:33 PM
This is truly Unequally Yolkness my friend.
Kyser Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Never cut a rug, especially an oriental, ha!
Fowler Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:07 PM
My advice is observe, observe, observe. And don't marry until you are at least 35, have known the person 10 years, watched his/her reactions around you/ family/ friends/ waiters, and then be cautious! LOL
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 8:00 PM
Don't you think you're rushing into things a bit here, Linda? How can you know someone after only ten years? And I've heard that the teenage brain is not fully formed yet at age 35... Careful, caution!!!!
Lawless Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 5:08 AM
he set the bar so high no one could jump over it as he walked under it
M  Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 11:59 PM
Love this poem Gershon..so well worded and cleverly written! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 8:35 PM
Those last two lines!
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