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EVOLUTIONS CONVOLUTIONS

Thus, shall I ponder the convolutions Of our present state of devolution While consuming a new solution To the contradictions of evolution Surrounded by the walking dead Earphones screaming in their head Blue light failure their sole dread While others fight for green edged bread Perhaps we’re in a downward spiral With our destruction going viral Condemned it seems by judgeless trial Because our thoughts are now on file Thus, do the mad men mock each other Enslave their cousin’s sisters brother

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Paul Willason

Date: 12/9/2023 8:47:00 PM

A classic John....cutting observations that have an echo of Kafka...clever write. Delicious read with the usual "kick".

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/9/2023 10:17:00 AM

Wow, you hit a lot of social conditions in a short time. The colors also reflects an interesting contrast. Something to think about. Not too many of us write about these things in such a direct fashion. I admire that.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/9/2023 7:26:00 AM

Powerful write. I was watching this new movie on netflix … julia roberts in it. Made me think so deep so this poem kind of got me thinking… love it. So much has been said in such brilliant rhymes. Especially love the ending

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2023 3:31:00 PM

and ifs the song says, "and if everyone lit just one little candle" the environmentalist would go mental..

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/9/2023 6:48:00 AM

A lesson humans refuse to learn, John. Obviously peace is not as profitable.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/9/2023 6:18:00 AM

That last line is a classic. I certainly don't accept macro evolution but the current state of affairs has me scratching my head. How much longer will things be this way? Train wreck ahead...

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2023 3:29:00 PM

Tom,I grasp the concept of the mini and midi skirts of the 70's but the micro and macro still confuses the hell outta me....thanks for stopping to comment...and don't stand on the tracks

Silent One

Date: 12/9/2023 5:02:00 AM

Humans have been on a downward spiral since the beginning of time... maybe we are a failed experiment and the aliens have given up.. Great rhymes.

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2023 9:29:00 AM

SO, I have often pondered the idea that this is just some giant aliens ant farm and he keeps on shaking it.....

Lin Lane

Date: 12/9/2023 4:49:00 AM

The virus we share results in madness time and again. You can mock me and put me on trial if you can find a fair minded jury. But if they condemn me and I can prove they’re all insane, I will demand absolution. You had my mind whirling with your thoughts in this one, John.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2023 8:49:00 AM

That depends on what escapes from my lips that no one else knows, and what I know… I’m not divulging.

John Lawless
Date: 12/9/2023 9:30:00 AM

the od query If they arrested you for being a (FITB) would they have enough evidence to convict you....