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Evolution of Freedom

Broken cups
goodbye letters
sounds of anger
doesn’t get better
quiet life 
calm as can be


Then slammed
sliding back
chaos sings
battered wings
shattered dreams
pain of fire
heart ripped out
debased demeaned
always unseen
shut doors
locked gates
eyes wide open
see no fate ..


Separation
of a
Hallucination
in the
Annihilation
and all
Validation
in the
Evolution
of our
Freedom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/14/2009 10:32:00 AM
Evolution is a brilliant subject, another Gem - Jayne>>James
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Date: 6/1/2009 4:47:00 AM
Wow. Powerful and emotional. The roller coaster journey to freedom or so it seems. Awesome poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/31/2009 12:17:00 AM
How do we hold what we cannot see ... abstract things are like illusions ... except when I read you talented writes.
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