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Mike Mokes was a devoted couch potato.
It started only months out of the cradle.
He had found his groove
And refused to move.
'Til his house was hit by a tornado.

Copyright © Paul Schneiter | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/25/2016 8:02:00 PM awesome one. I have one of those couch potatoes in MY home too but hope we don't get hit by a tornado!! Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 3/18/2016 11:40:00 AM This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers! Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 3/18/2016 6:13:00 PM Thank you, Funom. It's kind and thoughtful of you to comment. It makes me happy that the poem brightened your day. I hope many sunshine-filled days are in your future.

Lindsay Laurie Date: 3/4/2016 6:01:00 PM Tornadoes do have a habit of moving things Paul - Lindsay Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 3/18/2016 6:16:00 PM Thanks for commenting, Lindsay. Why are tornadoes so ill-behaved? It's my understanding that Aussies won't put up with them.

Lewis Raynes Date: 2/17/2016 8:16:00 PM great little piece Paul, thanks Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 2/24/2016 10:07:00 PM Thank you, Lewis, for your kind, supportive comment. I'm grateful.

Kp Nunez Date: 2/17/2016 5:59:00 PM :-) I have forgotten humorous your limericks are, Paul. Fun write... Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 2/24/2016 10:10:00 PM I sincerely appreciate your comment, Kim. It means a lot to me. hugs x x x

Suzanne Delaney Date: 2/17/2016 1:52:00 PM Cute one, Paul: Those tornadoes will do it. SuZ Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 2/24/2016 10:26:00 PM Thank you, Suzanne. I've never been in a tornado, although I once rode in a car made by Oldsmobile that had a similar name. I think the competition blew it away.