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Eve's Sensual Canvas

Eve's bleeding as we kiss under its canvas. Each caress melts my body like slippery butter. Your chocolate lips have me crave its trances. Every moan sets my soul into a flutter. Hidden under Twilight's soft arms - we are glued. I feel alive in your masculine physique. Rubbing your hands on me, I get into the mood. My lungs have surrendered and are now weak. Perfumed in roses, you make me your martyr. My knees plunge as you delicately paint my frame. Ebony hair of yours wraps me in much ardor. Breathe in the syrupy daze and I will scream your name. Our starving beasts can't camouflage anymore. In the flames that we drew, we'll finally let them roar. ~ Written On: July 17th, 2017 Form Chosen: Sonnet Word Chosen: "Sensual" Contest: Form S Sponsor: Broken Wings Won: 1st Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2017 2:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Alyssa ~*

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/18/2017 11:35:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2017 6:11:00 AM

Very sensual Alyssa congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/17/2017 5:27:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/17/2017 1:13:00 AM

Enjoyed this. Congrats for 1st place!! :) Regs Sunita

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/17/2017 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Sunita! :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/16/2017 3:05:00 AM

Gorgeously sensual and exquisitely written - well-deserved win, big congrats - love it! :-)

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/16/2017 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, Greg! :)

Sean Kibble

Date: 8/16/2017 1:17:00 AM

I knew it. Back to congratulate you. Well done Alyssa.

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/16/2017 11:07:00 AM

Thanks, Poet Ouroboros! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/15/2017 8:13:00 PM

Hi Alyssa, this is so passionate and so artistically expressed.., so much to love about nyour poem! It's beautifully sensual but the last two lines are pure sizzle! Congratulations on your win!

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/16/2017 11:05:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, Susan! :)

Dean Wood

Date: 8/15/2017 2:02:00 PM

I'm blushing already. Absolutely beautiful Alyssa. Congratulations!

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/16/2017 11:05:00 AM

Thank you, Dean! :)

Sean Kibble

Date: 8/12/2017 6:04:00 PM

Sensual much! Very Very creative. I should except this to do well in BW contest.

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/13/2017 12:20:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/8/2017 1:41:00 PM

VERY SENSUAL AND HOT. Wonderful verses painting a steamy scene.. Great art..

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/8/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thanks, Robert! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2017 5:09:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest..Very passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/23/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thanks, Sara! :)

Silent One

Date: 7/20/2017 5:41:00 AM

Sensual and beautiful poem.. some great lines in this Alyssa, especially the third stanza.. Good luck in the contest..

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/23/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One! :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/17/2017 9:39:00 PM

very sensual and well done, it's a hard subject without getting too graphic and you did it well...good luck

Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/17/2017 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for reading this, Frederic! I had to rephrase words a lot when making this to follow PS rules, but I think it turned out well. Good luck to you as well. :)