Alyssa Lorette Poet Sonnet

Eve's Sensual Canvas

Eve's bleeding as we kiss under its canvas.
Each caress melts my body like slippery butter.
Your chocolate lips have me crave its trances.
Every moan sets my soul into a flutter.

Hidden under Twilight's soft arms - we are glued.
I feel alive in your masculine physique.
Rubbing your hands on me, I get into the mood.
My lungs have surrendered and are now weak.

Perfumed in roses, you make me your martyr.
My knees plunge as you delicately paint my frame.
Ebony hair of yours wraps me in much ardor.
Breathe in the syrupy daze and I will scream your name.

Our starving beasts can't camouflage anymore.
In the flames that we drew, we'll finally let them roar.
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Written On: July 17th, 2017
Form Chosen: Sonnet
Word Chosen: "Sensual"
Contest: Form S
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Won: 1st Place

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Eve Roper August 18, 2017 at 2:33 AM Congratulations on your win, Alyssa ~* Alyssa Lorette August 18, 2017 at 11:35 AM Thank you! :)

Jan Allison August 17, 2017 at 6:11 AM Very sensual Alyssa congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Alyssa Lorette August 17, 2017 at 5:27 PM Thank you, Jan! :)

Sunita U.D Palawon August 17, 2017 at 1:13 AM Enjoyed this. Congrats for 1st place!! :) Regs Sunita Alyssa Lorette August 17, 2017 at 5:26 PM Thanks, Sunita! :)

Gregory Richard Barden August 16, 2017 at 3:05 AM Gorgeously sensual and exquisitely written - well-deserved win, big congrats - love it! :-) Alyssa Lorette August 16, 2017 at 11:07 AM Thank you, Greg! :)

Sean Kibble August 16, 2017 at 1:17 AM I knew it. Back to congratulate you. Well done Alyssa. Alyssa Lorette August 16, 2017 at 11:07 AM Thanks, Poet Ouroboros! :)

Susan Ashley August 15, 2017 at 8:13 PM Hi Alyssa, this is so passionate and so artistically expressed.., so much to love about nyour poem! It's beautifully sensual but the last two lines are pure sizzle! Congratulations on your win! Alyssa Lorette August 16, 2017 at 11:05 AM Thanks for your comment, Susan! :)

Dean Wood August 15, 2017 at 2:02 PM I'm blushing already. Absolutely beautiful Alyssa. Congratulations! Alyssa Lorette August 16, 2017 at 11:05 AM Thank you, Dean! :)

Sean Kibble August 12, 2017 at 6:04 PM Sensual much! Very Very creative. I should except this to do well in BW contest. Alyssa Lorette August 13, 2017 at 12:20 AM Thank you! :)

Robert Lindley August 8, 2017 at 1:41 PM VERY SENSUAL AND HOT. Wonderful verses painting a steamy scene.. Great art.. Alyssa Lorette August 8, 2017 at 1:47 PM Thanks, Robert! :)

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2017 at 5:09 PM Reads like a good contender for the contest..Very passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Alyssa Lorette July 23, 2017 at 3:52 PM Thanks, Sara! :)

Silent One July 20, 2017 at 5:41 AM Sensual and beautiful poem.. some great lines in this Alyssa, especially the third stanza.. Good luck in the contest.. Alyssa Lorette July 23, 2017 at 3:52 PM Thank you, Silent One! :)

Frederic Parker July 17, 2017 at 9:39 PM very sensual and well done, it's a hard subject without getting too graphic and you did it well...good luck Alyssa Lorette July 17, 2017 at 9:50 PM Thanks for reading this, Frederic! I had to rephrase words a lot when making this to follow PS rules, but I think it turned out well. Good luck to you as well. :)