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Eve's Daughter- Haiku Trilogy

A daughter of Eve I follow in her footsteps Flirting with danger Temptation whispers My heart is quick to listen Bewitching promise The forbidden taste Burns my lips with its sweetness Eve’s tears rain on me

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Date: 9/7/2015 9:17:00 AM
Good morning Eileen. Let me know of any poems I might have missed. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2015 9:23:00 AM
I'm just trying to trace the progression. You first comment was on the poem...] http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/your_evident_beauty_441266 This s it, but you didn't post again long after that. I'm on the trail for the second one. :) It's interesting. Hugs
Date: 11/14/2014 6:57:00 PM
I enjoyed this Trilogy, not the threesome most men fantasize about but a taste of the forbidden none the less *lol*.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2015 1:32:00 AM
Richard....I'm going through my old writes one by one trying to find that FIRST one that you posted on. As I'm doing that....I'm finding a lot of posts from you AFTER we got acquainted...and some of them I haven't responded to. I'm such a silly girl. So...I haven't found it yet....that first quote...but I'm looking. Hugs
Date: 12/6/2012 5:56:00 PM
Eileen, ... thank you for sharing your wonderful haiku. I feel for Eve... Looking forward to reading more of your poems tonight. Always~ & Forever ;-) PD
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