Everywhere Except Near Ninette

There will never 
Be sufficient down pour
In washing away your crucial absence
Even word smith falls short in lessening the pain
Primal lesson in contact with you, one is squandered
In treasured troves, expense of your beaded words
Will pay to shine ones soul's mane
Without you life neither was nor
Ever will be the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Juman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Marvelous write you got a knock for writing. Please do check out my work and tell me what you think. Thanks
Zubair Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:20 AM
This expression is like a balm to unsatiable feeling
Horsman Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 4:52 PM
Love this profound and sincere poetry,
Zubair Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Just a sprinkle of overflowed sentiments. Thanks
Loving Iii Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 3:58 PM
I remember the feeling, I know it too well. But I also remember a man telling me that I'll get over it. I think it lasted two more year. Till one day I asked the Lord to take the pain away. And slowly it did leave. the best thing that pain did was gave me feelings for my poetry.
Zubair Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 7:29 PM
I don't know how long it will last but it blessed me with words to spill through my fingers. Thanks for sharing your experience
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Good luck in the contest with this little gem, James :)
Zubair Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Thanks.Spontaneous moves directed by natural instincts.
Muideen Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 3:29 PM
A very beautiful and eloquent write. Good luck in the contest.......A.M.
Zubair Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Thanks. I am overwhelmed by the response
A  Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Samiha, I enjoyed this very much. Never tried the form. you have an excellent poem. SKAT
Zubair Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Thanks dear, your poems are no less inspiring
Ward Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Glorious - a sound 7, FAVE and FAVE Poet, Poet!
Zubair Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Thanks, a decent outlet makes one less despondent
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 8:57 AM
So nice to enjoy your verse this Sunday morning! Light & Love
Zubair Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Thanks, its been some time since we last communicated. For me this poem is just an outlet for pampered sentiments.
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