Everywhere Except Near Ninette

There will never 
Be sufficient down pour
In washing away your crucial absence
Even word smith falls short in lessening the pain
Primal lesson in contact with you, one is squandered
In treasured troves, expense of your beaded words
Will pay to shine ones soul's mane
Without you life neither was nor
Ever will be the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/8/2015 8:30:00 PM
Marvelous write you got a knock for writing. Please do check out my work and tell me what you think. Thanks
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/9/2015 6:20:00 AM
This expression is like a balm to unsatiable feeling
Date: 10/29/2015 4:52:00 PM
Love this profound and sincere poetry,
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/29/2015 7:30:00 PM
Just a sprinkle of overflowed sentiments. Thanks
Date: 10/29/2015 3:58:00 PM
I remember the feeling, I know it too well. But I also remember a man telling me that I'll get over it. I think it lasted two more year. Till one day I asked the Lord to take the pain away. And slowly it did leave. the best thing that pain did was gave me feelings for my poetry.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/29/2015 7:29:00 PM
I don't know how long it will last but it blessed me with words to spill through my fingers. Thanks for sharing your experience
Date: 10/20/2015 1:23:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this little gem, James :)
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/20/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thanks.Spontaneous moves directed by natural instincts.
Date: 10/18/2015 3:29:00 PM
A very beautiful and eloquent write. Good luck in the contest.......A.M.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/20/2015 2:04:00 PM
Thanks. I am overwhelmed by the response
Date: 10/15/2015 8:58:00 PM
Samiha, I enjoyed this very much. Never tried the form. you have an excellent poem. SKAT
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/15/2015 11:19:00 PM
Thanks dear, your poems are no less inspiring
Date: 10/13/2015 2:59:00 PM
Glorious - a sound 7, FAVE and FAVE Poet, Poet!
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/13/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thanks, a decent outlet makes one less despondent
Date: 10/11/2015 8:57:00 AM
So nice to enjoy your verse this Sunday morning! Light & Love
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/11/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks, its been some time since we last communicated. For me this poem is just an outlet for pampered sentiments.
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