Everything Will Be Fine

Oscar made his last trip to the vet,
in tears with empty basket, you came home,
mourning the loss of more than just a pet
that sat with you, and now you sit alone.
No more begging for treats or just a fuss,
life may seem hollow now, and it may be
hard to get used to now just three of us,
 you'll pull through,with Isis the cat, and me.
Group hug.

R.I.P Oscar, died July 20th, 2018


For contest 'Nine lines to let them know everything will be fine', sponsor Silent One.

July 21st 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Lovely poem, Viv. Congrats on your podium finish.
Moorman Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Viv, I have 5 dogs buried on my property. Living in the country makes it possible to ensure that pets who have been loved for years can be buried in sight of the house to be remembered daily for the love they showed. Great write and genuine compassion for the pet you immortalized.
One Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Aww poor Oscar.. Always sad when a pet dies.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Messina Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Sorry for the loss of your dog, Viv. I've lost a few in my lifetime as well. Nice write...best of luck in the contest...Charlie
La France Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Viv, this touched me deeply as my cat of twenty years just died, June 11 not at the vet but in my arms. Your nine lines are wonderful. So sorry for your loss, I know this pain. Imagine a big hug for you and your good wife!
Neumann Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 2:22 AM
I am sorry for you and the pet. It lives on in memories and in that poem...
Man Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Viv.. sorry for your loss. I will be devastated when "Bo" my dog, passes! The poem is precious!!
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Thanks, Lyric, I hope your Bo has many years left. Regards, Viv
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Sorry for your loss, Viv. Touching poem. Pets are family members too!
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Indeed, Daniel, Oscar has been a much loved member for twelve years, my good lady is broken and in a dark place right now. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv
Ashley Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 9:32 AM
A very moving poem, Viv, so beautiful in it’s reassurance that everything’s gonna be alright, even in the grips of grief. I feel your poem in my heart.. best wishes for a win my friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Viv, I’m so sorry for your family’s loss of your beloved Oscar. I do believe you’ll be reunited some day..
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thanks, Susan, this horrible storm we weather will pass, I'm sure. Viv x
Delaney Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 8:00 AM
So sad and their lives so brief. I reached out and touched my faithful little Kea as I read this. Hugs for your loss. SuZ
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thanks Suzy D, give Kea a kiss for me. Viv x
Vaso Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:37 AM
Such a touching poem Viv, I could say more but then I would get to sentimental at this hour, beautiful poem!
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thanks Arthur, appreciate the visit. Regards, Viv
Michael Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Oscar is surely cooling it up in heaven... Everything is going to be alright .... Nice write... All the best Viv
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 1:00 AM
I hope so, Arturo, then we shall meet again, by God's grace. Thanks for visiting. Regards, Viv
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