Everything Went Black

I'm sitting putting on makeup, and everything went black
My soul jumped out my body, without a clue or sign
I couldn't move my feet, my mind went into another world
I became a little girl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 28, 2012 at 10:13 AM
‡ Wow, What A Trip! But Somehow One Can Perhaps Imagine How Beautiful It May Have Been, Sweet Beautiful Delilah. A Song Playing Now With The Lyrics, 'Say What You Need To Say?' You Looked Beautiful, Sitting Afore The Mirror In My Mind And A Poetic Kiss. Have A Beautiful Day, Beautiful Delilah. Love Always, Rachel *
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