Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Tetractys

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- Everything Is Better Barefoot -

Blue 
vision
Dipping toes
feel the softness
The warm breeze of the summer joys tempts me
Crystallized sand like feathers on the toes
Gold in my eyes
Breathe taking
and pure
bliss





05/09/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper 
# 2
3rd place in the contest

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Sarah Hassarati October 12, 2020 at 2:07 AM Such a visual poem. Delightful. Thank you. Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2020 at 2:20 AM - Thank you very much, Sarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar October 8, 2020 at 10:22 AM Great imagery and a wonderful picture! Loved the title you chose too.... ~ Ani Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2020 at 11:50 AM - Thank you very much, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bj Legros Kelley October 1, 2020 at 2:08 PM Oh, sounds heavenly! Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 1:24 AM - Thank you very much, BJ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree September 24, 2020 at 9:13 PM I have tender feet, lol. I always have. I feel what you're saying though. Love the pic and this write. It is very descriptive. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Love, Angela Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 2:01 AM - Tender feet need soft and warm sand, Angela :) - Many thanks for your comments ... welcome back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu September 24, 2020 at 3:47 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem has the feel of summer. i like ir. Hugs Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu September 25, 2020 at 10:40 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, yes this poem felt like summer. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 1:58 AM - Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman September 22, 2020 at 6:51 AM Love walking on the beach, especially in the evening. Lovely write Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2020 at 7:10 AM - I always walk barefoot ... - Thank you very much, James :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry September 21, 2020 at 10:16 AM Beauty of the view of the feet in the soft sand warming the poet's feet ... Good sensations that awaken sandy poetry, a wonder... salute dear Anne-Lise alkas Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 10:26 AM - Thank you very much for your visit and the lovely comments, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler September 20, 2020 at 2:15 PM Yes indeed... You can literally get closer to nature if you take the time to walk in your bare feet... I really enjoyed this poem and the wonder it creates... Keep up the great writing, my friend :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 9:52 AM - I walk barefoot all year, Kelly ... hate socks :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera September 17, 2020 at 7:41 PM Here, I am back to congratulate, Anne-Lise, on your win!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 9:50 AM - Always nice to see you, Newton ... many thanks for the congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper September 17, 2020 at 7:10 PM Lovely write, Sunshine .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve.. Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 9:49 AM - Thank you very much for my place on your winner list, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christopher Flaherty September 17, 2020 at 3:05 PM Too true Anne-Lise Sad how this could be turned in its head and used and referenced in the same sentence as Barefoot and Pregnant Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 9:48 AM "Barefoot and Pregnant" (???) ... I'm not pregnant :)

Krish Radhakrishna September 10, 2020 at 11:50 AM Anne-Lise I love this poem! beautifully done my friend!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 12:02 PM - A pleasure to hear ... thank you very much, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel September 10, 2020 at 12:31 AM Simply outstanding, Anne-lise, mine on the same pic pales in comparison:) Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 6:52 AM - Thank you very much, Jo ... and yours was beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy September 9, 2020 at 5:46 AM SO lovely, Anne-Lise. Janice Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 6:50 AM - Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2020 at 5:44 PM this is FANTASTIC, dear!! I chose that picture too. Just love that warm sand. Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 6:50 AM - Andrea, thank you very much for your visit and the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France September 8, 2020 at 2:09 PM Anne-Lise, this is beautiful, I love the line "Crystallized sand like feathers on the toes" a FAV for me _Constance Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 6:49 AM - Glad you liked my poem - Many thanks for your lovely comments and your priceless fave, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos September 8, 2020 at 10:41 AM Pure bliss and certainly a pure win - so wonderfully describe I can feel the sand on my toes, and yes barefoot is great! Hugs and blessings dear friend. Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 6:47 AM - I hate socks ... I walk barefoot all year ... but, not when we have snow :) - Thank you very much for your lovely comments, dear sister :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera September 7, 2020 at 11:14 AM The image is wonderfully represented in this piece!! A sure Top Win!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 6:45 AM - Many thanks for the uplifting comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus September 7, 2020 at 6:36 AM A vision and feeling of bliss, Anne-Lise! Nowadays, cos of covid, I avoid sandy beaches which tend to get crowded...but yours is one which tempts :) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 4:49 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2020 at 5:32 AM Just the thought of it...ahh! Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 4:47 AM - Kim, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One September 6, 2020 at 1:46 PM Great theme for this contest... You did this very well . Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2020 at 4:47 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger September 6, 2020 at 1:29 AM Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I feel this sand and smell the salt in the air! Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:12 AM - Warm sand ... feels lovely in the summer, Caren :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell September 5, 2020 at 2:34 PM Lovely piece Anne-Lise, makes one think of days on beach we missed this summer. Have a blessed weekend,Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:10 AM - Gordon, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios September 5, 2020 at 2:19 PM My best to you on this.marvelous piece. Pangie xxx Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:09 AM - Thank you very much for your comments, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer September 5, 2020 at 1:38 PM i love the "feathers on the toes" line, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 2:09 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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