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Everything Has Changed

She was born an angel, broken down by the imperfect world of hatred. New day; Head down, deep breathes, "don't panic" she whispers. She hasn't been happy for quite a while, but it's okay. People walk over her and hurt her without a care. Such a beautiful angel, and the only thing she encounters is evil. One day her dark world changes. A light at the end of a tunnel? She never looked for love, she always thought it was a lie. She only knew hatred, although she wished for love and fairy tales. He came into her life like a hurricane at the worst possible time. He blew air into her lifeless body. Finally she could breathe. She's new. Her soul mingled with his and she was dancing on air. The feeling of his hands intertwining hers. She wished for nothing more than to stay in his arms. Love? What is love? She thought to herself, because no definition ever seemed enough. To her love was like the feeling of hearing your favorite song. You want to sing as loud as you can, but in the beginning you're afraid. Afraid you won't sing the right words, and people will look at you like you're stupid. When you start to fall for someone you're afraid to do something wrong, you're afraid to mess everything up, and then they won't look at you the same. In the end, you just have to stop caring, and give it your all. Once you stop caring, you singer harder and it doesn't matter how badly you mess up, once you love a song, you never forget it, and same goes with love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/2/2016 1:42:00 PM
Breanna,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Breanna Holland
Date: 8/8/2016 7:22:00 PM
It's a pleasure to meet you
Date: 8/2/2016 2:38:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Breanna. Love is like a song...I really like that! Beautiful expression of falling in love. Aloha, Connie ; )
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Date: 8/2/2016 12:20:00 AM
Breanna,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Breanna Holland
Date: 8/8/2016 7:21:00 PM
Hiii Skat, I've had an account on here before but I created a new one. Thank you for the warm welcome though, it was sweet <3

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