Everyone Loves You When You'Re Dead

Life was pale canvas 
to put some colour on 
you never managed 
has there been any effort for real
or its all experimental stage for another life
somewhere
where molds aren't capable to digest your soul

lying on the edge of the bed
left you uncover

they were scared of you
but you were more scared of them

roller coaster of emotion you was
unable to be destructive on your own
disabled for finding the shadow of your own
desperately seeking for some black string to be attached  

as excuse
for excuse

wanting to be recognized to someones child
resulted in piggy bank
daddy said you're fine
and smashed it

life became a room 
with freshly painted white walls
each from top to bottom carrying shelves
on which glass cups were arranged
mimicking a kaleidoscope

your bearing with its reflections wearing a sunglasses
ended up with bloody feet

this life needed you
couldn't you love yourself just a little bit?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Boddie Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:33 AM
on the canvas of my heart....I try to Beautify my art....so that any eye that holds it....will understand how I composed it....exposing the actual Life of this man....and with your inspiration, I will expand....into a stronger writer day by day....and with writers like you to inspire me, it will continue this way....;)
Cokolic Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Thank you for this kind words :))
Gautam Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 3:15 AM
Full of emotions... Nice ! :)
Cokolic Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Thank you :)
A  Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 11:22 AM
awesome
Cokolic Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 2:52 AM
:)
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