Every Time I Have You Close- Triolet Sonnet

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Every time I have you close my dear
This remarkable yearning of you brings me home
The sound of your voice reaches the clouds so far
Every time I have you close my dear
My lips are stilled to me you're like a star
In my heart I evoke your name and just roam
Every time I have you close my dear...
This remarkable yearning of you brings me home
And I am so happy to have  your love so far
Every time I have you close my dear
I know that losing you would leave me a scar
And  rhymes like before no more would flow
Every time I have you close my dear
This remarkable yearning of you brings me home.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014


October.2.2014


My triolet sonnet here is free style ...that means, I didn't write it  with 8 or 10 syllables or any steady number of syllable pattern at all. That's simple!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/21/2014 10:37:00 PM

Not seeing the pattern? the end of line 1 should rhyme with lines 3,4,5,7,9,10,11,& 13? They are all a's? 1,4,7,10,& 13 (the repeat but still rhyming with the word - close? - even if the whole line is not repeated - but you only repeated the whole line in 1, 7 &10? - I like forms I just couldn't figure out how to do it? Let me know.I see (A/b/c/a?/d/d/A/d) Light & Love