Every minute matters

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In a world of alternate reality
choices made lead us down
to different destinations

We zigzag leaving patterns forging pathways 
with consequences hardly insignificant
each triggering a chain reaction

What a complicated maze
of endless possibilities
with outcomes unpredictable

Every thought every action
every silence every denial
weaves in fact the fabric of our destiny



AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2025 8:15:00 PM

this is so true and so well expressed. Wanted to tell you, I saw a mail addressed to me from you, but I can't open it because it had no subject line.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2025 7:57:00 PM

-- as well as parallel universes... ~ gw