Linda Alice Fowler Poet Other

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Other Form – Trionet: created by L Milton Hankins, a two-stanza poem. The first stanza follows the rules for a standard triolet of eight (8) lines ABaAabAB (capital letters are repeated lines). The second stanza consists of six (6) lines, formed with five (5) lines repeated from the first stanza and adding an appropriate non-repeated rhyming last line with a rhyme scheme of AAABBb.

Every Minute Each Day

Every minute, every hour of each day,
my heart entreats you with longing.
I desire your heart trusts what I say
every minute, every hour of each day.
If God exists, I avidly pray
He accords my desire for belonging.
Every minute, every hour of each day
my heart entreats you with longing.

Every minute, every hour of each day,
I desire your heart trusts what I say.
If God exists, I avidly pray
He accords my desire for belonging.
My heart entreats you with longing
accompanied by true love’s prolonging.

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CayCay Godwin May 10, 2025 at 3:21 PM This is a cool form and you wrote a wonderful poem with it. Enjoyed ... CayCay Linda Alice Fowler May 12, 2025 at 10:55 AM Many thanks CayCay. It is a fun form to write. So glad you enjoyed it. :)

Marilene Evans May 7, 2025 at 4:20 PM Congratulations, Linda! Wonderful poem! Linda Alice Fowler May 7, 2025 at 4:49 PM Many thanks Marilene. hugs :)

David Crandall May 6, 2025 at 6:03 PM Great poem of devotion! Linda Alice Fowler May 7, 2025 at 7:30 AM Thanks Dave. :)

Panagiota Romios May 6, 2025 at 6:37 AM Congratulations winner!?? A fav and an outstanding poem. So glad we are friends, Pangie Linda Alice Fowler May 6, 2025 at 9:24 AM Hello my delightful darling friend! You honor me with your kind words and fav! Thank you! :

Howard Kerr May 6, 2025 at 12:38 AM Hi Linda, I’m impressed as everyone who reads this should be by this deep, authentic, heartfelt piece. Coherent and crystal clear. Howard Linda Alice Fowler May 6, 2025 at 9:20 AM Wow Howard. Thanks for the supportive and encouraging words. :)

Gary Radice May 6, 2025 at 12:00 AM The late great (and very much missed on these pages) L Milton Hankins would love this Linda. Congratulations on writing a great trionet. Cheers - Gary Linda Alice Fowler May 6, 2025 at 9:20 AM Many thanks Gary. Yes, I'm glad you think so. Milt is missed, but certainly not forgotten. :)

Ghairo Daniels May 5, 2025 at 11:35 PM Lovely expression of what the Heart truly desires, written in a form I did not know of ~ trust and belonging is key. X Linda Alice Fowler May 6, 2025 at 9:27 AM Thank you Ghairo. Give the form a try. I think you'll enjoy it. :)

Vanya Evangeline May 5, 2025 at 8:26 AM What a fascinating poem form, and you wrote it very well. Thanks for writing this! Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2025 at 9:09 AM Thank you Vanya. :)

Paula Goldsmith May 4, 2025 at 11:52 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win................ Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2025 at 7:52 AM Thank you dear friend. :)

Krishnanand Guptar May 3, 2025 at 11:37 AM Congratulations dear poetess on your placement in this poetry contest with a lovely spiritual poem entreating your divine longing. Wish you a pleasant weekend filled with divine light and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2025 at 9:14 AM Hi, Linda :) - Congratulations on your fourteen beautiful lines in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2025 at 7:52 AM Hi Anne-Lise. So good to see you. Many thanks on the congrats. Make this a good week! :)

Hilda Greenhough May 1, 2025 at 11:11 AM Your poem sparkles with ingenuity. I'd like to add that your effortless achievement in continuing rhyme is awesome. Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2025 at 7:51 AM Thank you for your too kind words Hilda. :)

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2025 at 7:58 PM What a great example of his form you gave us here. Beautiful. Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2025 at 7:51 AM An honor to write in his form. Many thanks Andrea. :)

Paula Goldsmith April 27, 2025 at 1:12 PM What a wonderful write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful spring day writing away......... Linda Alice Fowler May 5, 2025 at 7:49 AM Thank you Paula! :)