Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

- Every Breath You Take -

To get my heart in the right rhythm, I have to catch your inner you
Holding hands kiss colors inside sunshine warm paradise 

Together we share our dreams with a glass of pink champagne
Celebrating a living memory of eternal beauty sparkling gems glisten

We will find ourselves in an everlasting magical journey
Where the golden barley shakes silken softly whispers in our breeze

I'll walk with you through ages of time
Uniting as one shadow embraced dancing silver treasure

Pure angel of dawn, you've stolen my heart
Weightless without body floating beautiful falling inside the soul's desire 







Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  18.04.2015 
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Connie Marcum Wong May 10, 2015 at 1:19 AM This collaboration is a wonderful choice for Poem of the Week. Congratulations to you both! 7

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 9, 2015 at 3:43 PM Your poem glows with beautiful imagery and warm romance...congrats on being chosen TPOW! So glad I didn't miss this one!! Hugs, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud May 8, 2015 at 3:41 AM ohh my, a great tandem you both are, anne and liam... toast to your POTW award!.. huggs

Nandita Das May 6, 2015 at 3:21 AM Congratulations on this being chosen as The Poem of the Week.Glad this beautiful poem was chosen as it's my favorite.

Gary Bateman May 5, 2015 at 12:21 PM Many Congratulations to you Liam Mate!! and to Dear Anne-Lise on achieving "Poem of the Week" for the quite sensational couplet write. Quite Superb!! Best Always, Gary

Anmol Samal May 5, 2015 at 2:25 AM A huge congratulations to you both.... the poem is very beautiful....

Jan Allison May 4, 2015 at 5:39 PM poem of the week well deserved Anne Lise and Liam:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kp Nunez May 3, 2015 at 7:48 PM Wow, I get to congratulate you both for the second time! Yes! Hugs to you Liam and Anne! Kim :)

Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2015 at 7:05 PM Way to go both of you! Congratulations on this honor.

Casarah Nance May 3, 2015 at 2:26 PM The two of you are great together and being poem of the week proves it, nicely done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2015 at 1:03 PM - "Poem of the Week" ... the second week! - The first time it has happened! - Awesome !!!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz April 28, 2015 at 12:24 PM Nice and tender words in a poem which in my opinion is mostly prose very well penned

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2015 at 12:09 PM - A happy surprise my friend Liam - Poem of the Week !!!! - I am more than 50% happy :))) - I am 110% happy !!!! - CONGRATULATIONS TO US !!!! - warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith April 26, 2015 at 11:36 AM Congrats on this being P.O.W on Anne-Lise's page.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2015 at 5:38 AM - Of course, a 7 + fav !!!! - <3 & hugs

Nandita Das April 26, 2015 at 5:37 AM Supremely beautiful n magical. A#7 n a favorite.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri April 26, 2015 at 5:28 AM A beautiful romantic freeverse in poetic wordings. U crafted in a swell way wow. Nice to read u again. Hope u will mine latest too.

Gary Bateman April 25, 2015 at 10:09 PM Liam and Anne-Lise, Couplet verses of sheer beauty and magnificence . . . Truly a joy to read!! A "7"/FAV!! Best Always, Gary Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:47 AM gary great to see you pal i surely missed you being around passing you a warm smile wishing you and your lovely wife a blessed weekend Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:43 AM thank you deeply catie for the beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed day

Tim Smith April 25, 2015 at 8:12 PM So much romance ...lovely guys Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:30 AM thank you tim dear pal for the beautiful comment wishing you a blessed day

Dorian Petersen Potter April 25, 2015 at 6:45 PM Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and wonderful loving love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoy it!A real gem!Just awesome! I love it very much.A 7+++ to each!A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!To me you're the best in everything Liam.Congrats on this one being P.O.W on Anne-Lise's page!So happy for you guys!You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^" Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:27 AM thank you ever so kindly dorian for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated wishing you a blessed day

Jan Allison April 25, 2015 at 6:27 PM I remember the title from when Anne Lise posted it - such amazing imagery - absolutely stunning collaboration my friends:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:25 AM thank you jan always great hearing from you wonderful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed day