Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Every Breath You Take -

To get my heart in the right rhythm, I have to catch your inner you
Holding hands kiss colors inside sunshine warm paradise 

Together we share our dreams with a glass of pink champagne
Celebrating a living memory of eternal beauty sparkling gems glisten

We will find ourselves in an everlasting magical journey
Where the golden barley shakes silken softly whispers in our breeze

I'll walk with you through ages of time
Uniting as one shadow embraced dancing silver treasure

Pure angel of dawn, you've stolen my heart
Weightless without body floating beautiful falling inside the soul's desire 






Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  18.04.2015 
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Richard Gumede May 11, 2015 at 8:18 AM Good one. Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2015 at 8:38 AM - Thanks for visit and comments, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miguel Torres May 2, 2015 at 7:23 PM Not bad, Mizz Anne Lise! Congrats to you on this POW. Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2015 at 12:56 PM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Miquel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathy Ostapchuk May 2, 2015 at 5:12 PM lovely poem Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2015 at 12:56 PM - Kathy, thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Trenton Moore May 1, 2015 at 9:37 AM I enjoyed it. Anne-Lise Andresen May 2, 2015 at 12:40 PM - Trenton, thanks for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams April 30, 2015 at 8:32 PM I love the write, it gives breathe to every word. Congratulations Anne Lise Andresen. Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2015 at 4:09 AM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Marilyn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola April 28, 2015 at 9:35 PM Your poem feels as light as angels hair. Divine. Congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2015 at 3:08 AM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Jill - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards April 28, 2015 at 7:49 PM This lovely poem lifts one's spirits with the whisper of romance !! Congratulations on your poem of the week, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2015 at 3:08 AM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Carrie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode April 27, 2015 at 4:11 AM Congrats Anne,I am so happy to see this as the Poem of the week ,no doubt an excellent work...huggs Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2015 at 8:21 AM - Nice to see you, Kayod5 :) - Thank you for greeting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mary Diliberto April 26, 2015 at 7:29 PM i enjoyed every word, beautiful Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2015 at 12:42 AM - Thank you, Mary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman April 26, 2015 at 1:01 PM Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and to Liam on this fine poem and for having it chosen for "Poem of the Week." Extraordinarily well-done!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2015 at 1:58 PM - The pleasure is great, especially when I can share it 50/50 with a good friend .... my co- partner Liam :) - Thank you, Gary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 11:50 AM passing you a smile anne lise to congratulate you dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful day and thank you all for the wonderful comments heartfelt Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2015 at 12:07 PM - A happy surprise my friend Liam - I am more than 50% happy :))) - I am 110% happy !!!! - CONGRATULATIONS TO US !!!! - warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)))

Tim Smith April 26, 2015 at 11:35 AM Congratulations you two on the Poem of the Week : ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2015 at 12:03 PM - A happy surprise .... - Thank you, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak April 24, 2015 at 4:04 PM Any collaboration between you and Liam is magical, and this is no exception. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2015 at 4:32 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Monterey :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison April 23, 2015 at 8:18 AM You guys deserve a big applause for this romantic write... MAGICAL! Hugs, Jack xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2015 at 8:41 AM - Liam is easy to work with and a wonderful friend :))) Jack Ellison April 23, 2015 at 8:32 AM Terrified... I definitely would be too! Really can't imagine how you collaborate! Guess it's a lot of back and forth conversation and editing! Must have to be very open to a different approach!!! xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2015 at 8:25 AM - Liam and me have made many write together ..... and I really love them all together - But, I must admit that the first time he asked me .... I was terrified :) - Thank you for visiting and comments, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola April 22, 2015 at 3:08 AM sooo beautiful Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2015 at 3:43 AM - Thank you for visiting and comments, Jill :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock April 21, 2015 at 6:38 PM A very romantic write by both of you. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2015 at 3:05 AM - Thank you, Phyllis :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper April 19, 2015 at 6:16 PM My friend the images you and Liam have woven are beautiful. You two write so well together, seemless, exquisite phrases. I truely love the magic.Bravo! love Shane xxx Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2015 at 1:55 AM - A pleasure to share, thanks for the lovely comments and visits Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May April 19, 2015 at 2:57 PM Beautiful cowrite Anne...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 4:30 PM - Thank you, Joseph :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick April 19, 2015 at 12:46 PM Another romantic collaborative work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 12:49 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Sara :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley April 19, 2015 at 9:34 AM A great collab my friends.. Very romantic poetry and you guys are a perfect match for writing together IMHO. A7 and bravooooooo!! Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 11:49 AM - Glad you enjoy it, Robert :) - Thank you for visiting, a 7, bravoooooo and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez April 19, 2015 at 1:45 AM Another romantic duet from your pens my friends! Lovely.... :) Kim Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 11:47 AM - Thanking you for visit and comments, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter April 18, 2015 at 9:35 PM Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and wonderful love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully penned.A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoy it!A real gem!Just awesome!A 7+++ to each!A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 11:46 AM - Thanking you for visit, a 7 + fav. and comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 18, 2015 at 4:23 PM brightly done from liam and you, anne... so wndearing!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 11:46 AM - Thanking you for visit and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler April 18, 2015 at 2:56 PM When two hearts beat as one, nothing can tear them apart, and that is when dreams become reality... I enjoyed this very enchanting write from you and Liam! Well done to you both! Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 11:45 AM - Thanking you for visits and comments, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath April 18, 2015 at 2:49 PM Sorry, perhaps forgot to click 7. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2015 at 11:44 AM - Thanking you for a 7 :)

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