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Free Vector | Cartoon person with a sunburn at the beach

Jim starts the day with good intention Jobs need doing that require his attention. The garden needs a good sprucing up His vegetation 'triffids' are running amok. He mows the lawn, trims the hedges, Creates those nice, neat lined edges. Weeds the borders, deadheads the flowers, Feeds the plants their nutritional powers. The hard soil is dug, ready and prepped To sow the seeds for home grown veg. Must not forget to prune back the tree A labour of love is what it can be. Hours of work that seemed never ending His body and limbs, stretching and bending. Sun burnt skin, his head now aches Back is killing him, so takes a break. Joints and muscles moan and groan Weeds now gone are finally dethroned. Jim's bones applaud with clicks and cracks His badge was the sting when a wasp attacked. Admiring his garden that he has served His body felt it carried every ache in the world. The thing Jim will remember and quickly did learn To wear factor fifty to avoid the sunburn. 29.08.24

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Date: 9/2/2024 1:34:00 AM
thanks, this brought a smile, reminds me of someone, Oh, and were did you get that picture of me. LOL.
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Date: 9/8/2024 2:33:00 AM
Hi Simon, glad to hear it made you smile. Can't say, but freepik did help lol...Emilia : )
Date: 8/31/2024 8:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. I know how he feels. I have been burned by the sun. It hurts..... Have a fun weekend.............
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Date: 9/1/2024 1:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula. I have never learnt lol. Hope you are enjoying and having a good weekend. Emilia : )
Date: 8/30/2024 2:09:00 PM
Good one Emilia. Ouch - poor Jim!
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Date: 9/1/2024 1:13:00 AM
Thank you very much David. Emilia : )
Date: 8/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
Lol, you're in fine form Emilia, great advice at the end though. Love the humour, a fave for me. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 8/30/2024 12:59:00 PM
Hi Tom and thank you. It is good to see you again. I will be glad when the weather starts to cool a bit more. Hope you are keeping well too. Thank you also for the fav. Emilia : )

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