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Every atom has a memory a feeling to each cell and every body with a mind and heart setting us individually apart ---------------------------- every apart has a need to be one with another – and then, one with a greater whole every whole is a lonely god with no-one else to love and no place else to go

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/3/2022 12:13:00 PM

Interesting and thought provoking insights, Joe. Great writing! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2022 11:17:00 AM

I appreciate that very much, Joe. Blessings.

Joe Dimino
Date: 12/3/2022 12:22:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn. Still thinking about your most recent poem~ a masterpiece! Blessings my friend!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/3/2022 8:17:00 AM

Yes every whole is a stand alone, but how proud must it be, that its made up of every part to make up, something like you or me? Terrific poem Joe. I enjoyed the read.

Joe Dimino
Date: 12/3/2022 8:29:00 AM

Hi Wendy; so pleased you enjoyed the read. I don't know...I just ask the questions, really what most of my writing is about. What most of my life is about:) I think I started with, why is the sky blue? And have yet to be fully convinced. Blessings my friend.