Every

Every atom
has a memory

a feeling to each cell

and every body
with a mind and heart

setting us individually
apart
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every apart has a need 
to be one with another – 
and then, one with a greater
whole

every whole is a lonely god

with no-one else to love

and no place else to go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buehler Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Interesting and thought provoking insights, Joe. Great writing! :)
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December 4, 2022 at 11:17 AM
I appreciate that very much, Joe. Blessings.
DiMino Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Thank you, Evelyn. Still thinking about your most recent poem~ a masterpiece! Blessings my friend!
Volumes Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Yes every whole is a stand alone, but how proud must it be, that its made up of every part to make up, something like you or me? Terrific poem Joe. I enjoyed the read.
DiMino Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Hi Wendy; so pleased you enjoyed the read. I don't know...I just ask the questions, really what most of my writing is about. What most of my life is about:) I think I started with, why is the sky blue? And have yet to be fully convinced. Blessings my friend.
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