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*Images of Deadpan by Gfycat. Evermore Soul savored in wealth bestowing images plus instances, beseeching recalls throughout the happenings of first expended journeys, ~~solely me and you. Midnight dreamingly drifts nigh twilights twinkling stars, drooping its points into dawn's golden sleigh and swept via some constant sun, elicit ~~towards both of us. Fragmenting chapters riddled with episodes, timelessly abandons in tattered photos loosely bordered in leather, amassing dust ~~of our life courses. These lonely days drag into lonelier nights and a smile on my face dons from smiles barely shared, yet gently my eyes fill and breathe life in ~~you--happy am I. 2020 July 05 *1st Place* STRAND completely new ( 5 ) any theme any form ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 July 06

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Jcb Brul

Date: 9/9/2021 6:52:00 AM

So smooth! I am new to this form..Thank you for sharing this splendid write.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/9/2021 11:06:00 AM

Your gracious heart shines, JCB, blessings truly, Aloha!

L. J. Carber

Date: 7/7/2020 12:29:00 PM

Nicely done--a great reading voice too ! Congrats on your 1st.William

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/7/2020 12:44:00 PM

I am appreciative of sharing your reflections, L.J. -- Aloha~@William

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/7/2020 8:05:00 AM

Awesome write & win my friend...Congrats!! are in order...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/7/2020 10:32:00 AM

I am grateful for your considerations, Winged Warrior -- Aloha~@William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/6/2020 12:27:00 PM

Hi William! Congratulations on your top win. As always your poem is filled with elegant imagery - "fragmenting chapters riddled with episodes." Really nice!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/6/2020 10:08:00 PM

You honor me, Sam, I humble myself to your shared thoughtfulness -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/6/2020 10:06:00 AM

Nicely penned William. I especially like the line "midnight dreamily drifts nigh twilights twinkling" Congrats on your top win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/6/2020 10:24:00 AM

My extended courtesy for your kindheartedness, Jeanne, joyously well-pleased -- Aloha~@William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/6/2020 7:18:00 AM

BIG congrats on your TOP win, William with this awesome write.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/6/2020 10:20:00 AM

Many thanks my friend, Vijay, for your amiable share -- Aloha~@William

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/6/2020 5:51:00 AM

William it’s so nice to see you at the top with wonderful piece!;) congrats on your top win!;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/6/2020 10:15:00 AM

I am gratefully pleased with your kind thoughts, Brenda, as always -- Aloha~@William