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Evermore

*Images of Deadpan by Gfycat. Evermore Soul savored in wealth bestowing images plus instances, beseeching recalls throughout the happenings of first expended journeys, ~~solely me and you. Midnight dreamingly drifts nigh twilights twinkling stars, drooping its points into dawn's golden sleigh and swept via some constant sun, elicit ~~towards both of us. Fragmenting chapters riddled with episodes, timelessly abandons in tattered photos loosely bordered in leather, amassing dust ~~of our life courses. These lonely days drag into lonelier nights and a smile on my face dons from smiles barely shared, yet gently my eyes fill and breathe life in ~~you--happy am I. 2020 July 05 *1st Place* STRAND completely new ( 5 ) any theme any form ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 July 06
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Brul Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:52 AM
So smooth! I am new to this form..Thank you for sharing this splendid write.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Your gracious heart shines, JCB, blessings truly, Aloha!
Carber Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Nicely done--a great reading voice too ! Congrats on your 1st.William
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:44 PM
I am appreciative of sharing your reflections, L.J. -- Aloha~@William
Warrior Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Awesome write & win my friend...Congrats!! are in order...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:32 AM
I am grateful for your considerations, Winged Warrior -- Aloha~@William
Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Hi William! Congratulations on your top win. As always your poem is filled with elegant imagery - "fragmenting chapters riddled with episodes." Really nice!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 10:08 PM
You honor me, Sam, I humble myself to your shared thoughtfulness -- Aloha~@William
Mcgee Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 10:06 AM
Nicely penned William. I especially like the line "midnight dreamily drifts nigh twilights twinkling" Congrats on your top win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 10:24 AM
My extended courtesy for your kindheartedness, Jeanne, joyously well-pleased -- Aloha~@William
Pandit Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 7:18 AM
BIG congrats on your TOP win, William with this awesome write.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Many thanks my friend, Vijay, for your amiable share -- Aloha~@William
Chiri Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 5:51 AM
William it’s so nice to see you at the top with wonderful piece!;) congrats on your top win!;)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 10:15 AM
I am gratefully pleased with your kind thoughts, Brenda, as always -- Aloha~@William
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