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Evergreen Love - Example For Cliche Contest

concrete heart crumbles within Eden's flower garden ~ evergreen love

Cliche used: opposites attract

Example for Monoku 5 cliche contest.

Silent One
4 January 2017

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Sherry Beck January 17, 2018 at 3:55 PM I love the imagery. True our hardened hearts does crumble under beauty and love.

Paul Callus January 7, 2018 at 1:22 PM This is really good, S1; it leaves no doubt as to what was expected in your Cliché contest. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux January 7, 2018 at 8:09 AM What a stunning image and poem.

Chris Hagy January 6, 2018 at 8:18 PM I can picture the green engulfing a "concrete jungle"...nicely penned :)

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2018 at 9:24 PM OMG, I said 2017 on my poem? I wonder if I did that on the others!!! I better go see. Thanks for letting me know.

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2018 at 9:23 PM Very nice, Silent One. And the picture that accompanies it!

Susan Ashley January 5, 2018 at 7:38 PM An intriguing and beautifully expressed monoku Silent One. Fantastic imagery!

Alexis Y. January 5, 2018 at 9:43 AM Hi Silent , What a good example for your contest. I think I might give it a try:-) Alexis

Maria Williams January 5, 2018 at 3:54 AM A beautiful Monoku Si,you've set the threshold high here.Love the image as well...Maria

Akkina Downing January 4, 2018 at 8:34 PM Yep... but my gosh, I wish I can write like you :)

Eve Roper January 4, 2018 at 7:40 PM Beautiful imagery, Silent One. Hugs Eve ~`*

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton January 4, 2018 at 6:46 PM Cool. or Hot... whichever way you read it.

Connie Marcum Wong January 4, 2018 at 3:31 PM An insightful example Silent! : )

Nette Onclaud January 4, 2018 at 2:25 PM on the dot, S.O.. thanks for the inspiration!..huggs

Arturo Michael January 4, 2018 at 2:12 PM Lovely photo...A truthful monoku...It must crumble... All blessing to you, SO

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 4, 2018 at 2:12 PM Lovely contrast of opposites attracting, SO. Mighty fine example given for this contest. Love and peace for the new year.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2018 at 1:33 PM - A beautiful example, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 4, 2018 at 1:29 PM Inspiring blooming love dear, S.O.

Heidi Sands January 4, 2018 at 12:15 PM Very nice Silent One! :)

Laura Leiser January 4, 2018 at 11:50 AM Brilliant Monoku for your contest example, Silent. Your creativity knows no bounds!

Charlie Smith January 4, 2018 at 11:12 AM Excellent SO, well done...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 4, 2018 at 10:46 AM Crumble that paved parking lot and let paradise grow back, please.

Mike Gentile January 4, 2018 at 9:47 AM A perfect example, Silent One Good Luck !!

Supraja Kannan January 4, 2018 at 9:36 AM Lovely imagery... Great Example...

Judith S January 4, 2018 at 9:20 AM Love love LOVE that graphic!!! Perfect for the theme!!! And a very lovely monoku!!!