Doris Culverhouse Poet Concrete

Evergreen

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                                 /Evergreen Tree\
                        Sign of the eternal life in Jesus christ
                    /The red bows and ornaments are a symbol of your blood\
          /The star is the Lords star, that guided the wise men that night long ago\
           @                                                  The gifts in three                             @
                           A sign of the Trinity, Father, Son and Holy Spirit
                The perfect gift, given once to save the world from sin
         /Perfect love, help me overcome to the end of my life on Earth\
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Richard Pickett December 1, 2009 at 5:01 PM I am so glad to see so many Christians on the Soup. This piece was a delightful, enjoyable read. And I entered 3 contests Doris,,,,Thanks....RdP

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 28, 2009 at 9:18 AM Very creatively done indeed :) I'm sure this will do very well in the contest :) And I like dhow your poem has shown the symbolisms both in form and in word :) btw you're very much welcome to the typo lookout ;)

Sara Kendrick November 27, 2009 at 1:38 PM Congratulations on making the Hot Poems list with this one. Mom

Carolyn Devonshire November 23, 2009 at 5:53 PM What a wonderful poem with an amazing piece of art in the layout. You do the concrete form better than anyone I know, Doris! Wish I could learn to write this way. Much love, Carolyn

James Fraser November 22, 2009 at 2:00 PM Clever Concrete piece Doris, good luck in Deborah's contest >> James

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2009 at 3:55 PM Interesting design in this one. Very good explanations of the symbols of the holiday. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

Jared Pickett November 21, 2009 at 11:17 AM Nice shape, visually entertaining... Your words played right into the shape.... Excellent, artistic, creative.....:JP]

Marty Owens November 20, 2009 at 7:34 PM very nice Doris...Enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 20, 2009 at 6:52 PM Wonderful illustration and great idea for the contest... fabulous thought and the words are so stirring .. good luck .. blessings ... luv ... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry also.. appreciated.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

John Freeman November 20, 2009 at 6:31 PM Doris a concrete honor of one who is worthy of all praise. Wishing you a grand Thanksgiving holiday. Sincerely, love, Moses

Doris Culverhouse November 20, 2009 at 4:50 PM It's an abstract tree-get over it!!

P Sheart November 20, 2009 at 4:45 PM Hi Doris, A strong testimony to your faith. Enjoyed this wonderful Conrete. Have a great Thanksgiving! Love Light Patty