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Ever As Many I Try To Write For Thee

Ever as many I try to write for thee, All the words like a soft sand slip away, My soul, my heart, my dreams... All flee And all the words, therefore cannot say. I seek an answer from thyself... How much with thee I fall in love? He says as a brave knight compelled a triumph, Carried it along the earth, and to the sky above, As a rose and magic always dwelt together, Circle beneath a circle, flow like waves As a velvet passion that burns forever, Tenderly wrap our bodies with praise I love thee dearly, since before life has begun I love thee deeply, as night whispers are done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 2:27:00 PM
Dear Hassoon, very well done...I liked your writing your words and imagery...I liked the last two lines: "I love thee dearly, since before life has begun I love thee deeply, as night whispers are done" Good luck and keep writing....Bassam :)
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Hassoon Hijazi
Date: 6/25/2012 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Bassam for your encouragement, and all the best for you too dear.

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