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I wrote this while drowsy, I will check it over tomorrow and maybe work more with this one?

hope all are well out there.' God bless you all.' I added the word yet today..'

Paradigm unto eternity..' Yet knowing-less before the sundering decision, motive; persuasions... Reaches of thought..' every entity included, persons worthy all..' I beseech while able, much to Become true; is in existence, 'tense present' A relief of sorts is, and yet is passing; as inherent awareness hovers..' under-standing.? I never knew in one lesson, then there was' now what has been, has..' Coming is evermore, Subjugate errant thoughts, negative emotion still all can happen..' Human reason in not always able, let what wills to do, do..' and remain in readiness.. Alive to murmurs of the Spirit Holy..' © Joe Maverick 8-8-2015

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Date: 11/13/2015 10:47:00 AM
this is the third poem of your I have read where you use the word alive. 3 out of 8. this is not a critique merely an observations and a question of if its on purpose or unconscious thing.
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Date: 9/21/2015 6:13:00 AM
very serious and foreboding perhaps, just a question, would a little more directness add more power and effectiveness?
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:09:00 PM
enlightening me to discern thoughts and choices, joe... you really went with your heart.. ohh!.. huggs
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Date: 8/27/2015 3:30:00 PM
That last part I sure got! Deep thoughts, Joe! You have some very deep thoughts!
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:15:00 AM
That's quite some piece of poetry you've written there. It's a mouthful, it's a mind full. Wonderful.
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:38:00 AM
I'd like to comment here, Joe, but cannot get any consistency to grab onto. Sorry old buddy. Love, daver
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/22/2015 5:02:00 PM
Hello Daver, thanks for dropping by, its good to hear from you, in any event..' Hope you are being inspired..'
Date: 8/21/2015 12:04:00 PM
your last line Joe.....rather vibrates with tonal eventuated arising as from the sum of lines previous.....exactly reflects real life.....what with all the "half thoughts" and such, amazing we survive as long as we do.....or don't, in some cases.....i like this very much, Joe, the last line is outstanding! jimbo
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Date: 8/12/2015 6:30:00 PM
Alive to murmurs of the Holy Spirit..That still small voice..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/11/2015 5:39:00 AM
A pleasant read here, your noble write flows eloquent in the heart of the readers. I'm glad you leant something and also the readers have lean in this your uplifted write. Excellence work my friend, it's nice to see your face again...........A.M.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/11/2015 2:21:00 PM
So pleased you have enjoyed this piece Afolabi, My best wishes to you..'