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Eventuate

Paradigm unto eternity..' Yet knowing-less before the sundering decision, motive; persuasions... 

Reaches of thought..' every entity included, persons worthy all..' I beseech while able, much  to 

Become true; is in existence, 'tense present'  A relief of sorts is, and yet is passing; as inherent  awareness  hovers..'

under-standing.? I never knew in one lesson, then there was' now what has been, has..'

Coming is evermore, Subjugate  errant thoughts, negative emotion still all can happen..'

 Human reason in not always able, let what wills to do, do..'  and remain in readiness.. 

Alive to murmurs of the Spirit Holy..' 

© Joe Maverick 8-8-2015

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Nathan D. Date: 11/13/2015 10:47:00 AM this is the third poem of your I have read where you use the word alive. 3 out of 8. this is not a critique merely an observations and a question of if its on purpose or unconscious thing. Login to Reply

Karl Marszalowicz Date: 9/21/2015 6:13:00 AM very serious and foreboding perhaps, just a question, would a little more directness add more power and effectiveness? Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/29/2015 2:09:00 PM enlightening me to discern thoughts and choices, joe... you really went with your heart.. ohh!.. huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/27/2015 3:30:00 PM That last part I sure got! Deep thoughts, Joe! You have some very deep thoughts! Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 8/25/2015 8:15:00 AM That's quite some piece of poetry you've written there. It's a mouthful, it's a mind full. Wonderful. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 8/22/2015 11:38:00 AM I'd like to comment here, Joe, but cannot get any consistency to grab onto. Sorry old buddy. Love, daver Login to Reply Joe Maverick Date: 8/22/2015 5:02:00 PM Hello Daver, thanks for dropping by, its good to hear from you, in any event..' Hope you are being inspired..'

James Marshall Goff Date: 8/21/2015 12:04:00 PM your last line Joe.....rather vibrates with tonal eventuated arising as from the sum of lines previous.....exactly reflects real life.....what with all the "half thoughts" and such, amazing we survive as long as we do.....or don't, in some cases.....i like this very much, Joe, the last line is outstanding! jimbo Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/12/2015 6:30:00 PM Alive to murmurs of the Holy Spirit..That still small voice..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 8/11/2015 5:39:00 AM A pleasant read here, your noble write flows eloquent in the heart of the readers. I'm glad you leant something and also the readers have lean in this your uplifted write. Excellence work my friend, it's nice to see your face again...........A.M. Login to Reply Joe Maverick Date: 8/11/2015 2:21:00 PM So pleased you have enjoyed this piece Afolabi, My best wishes to you..'