"eventually"

Eventually someday, there will come a time
this heart of mine will finally stop hurting.
If a miracle somehow made you be mine
or if it should finally cease from its beating.
Feeling like I have been on this constant whine
of wanting an unattainable something.
But it is not by choice or my own freewill
as the days, they vanish but my heart standstill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Delacroix Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Very wonderful write, Well penned. It is good to keep hope. By being positive, life does one day turn around like a miracle. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Byrne Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 5:26 PM
I know the feeling!
Brown Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 4:48 PM
I love this. It is quite awesome. Excellent write da bomb!
Mehta Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 8:35 PM
I enjoyed the poem in ottava rima.
A   Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 6:33 PM
What a poem a flow from start to end nice one,P.D.
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