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Sweet Princess sensual sass oh virtue sublime two perfect little bows plump raspberries, fresh tapered, moist lusciousness wispy chili pepper spiciness pure plucked in cool rain for love's intent dew-dappled fruits of desire, inexorable. Oh, like spinning the moon in your hands there's naught but Luna's glinting your eyes that can hold measure to those nectarous berries. I shall consider it my honored duty, to so determine to let the soft, deep adoration of my press to your own be the only concern for which I shall offer my deft attention. Oh, do not gods themselves aspire to such commitments, thus? Your divine mouth is all I'll need for my own deliberate attainments ... loose the moon from your tender grasp, for this moment is ours alone its soft blue beams, the rill of romance that we swim together ... to drown. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Picture Prompt" Poetry Contest, Brenda Chiri, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/12/2020 11:58:00 PM
Back with congrats, my poet friend!
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Date: 3/11/2020 9:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 3/11/2020 2:48:00 PM
Incredible write, dear Bard, in shape, word choice, the weave of the moon into the script, and the vocabulary of intimacy that you so excel at. "the rill of romance that we swim together... to drown".
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Date: 3/11/2020 8:47:00 AM
Very well articulated! I WISH YOU WELL IN THE CONTEST!
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