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Evening Sonata

Written: December 28, 2023
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flounder in fictional field
—squeals and squeaks
Whimpers and growls
Sylphic swaying,
of flames spewing,
inwardly throbbing 
of my nostril
lobotomized cosmic orbs.
scent of cinnamon
and coral on a rosary
interlaced of aurulent rimes. 
 

Shrouded your burgundy &
coniferous ravines
loop of vitality
& unbearable redemption
in spanning eons,
ineffable wonder cradled
by melodic hums and buzzes
of lazy heat
and whistles of pitches
of endless hymns
echoes of choral chants
sung by soloists. 

black ravens croaking,
like peals of doom
dewy allelomorphs
with waft-aloft wings
angels of ethereal whisper
of thunder,
that rang deafeningly
through the crevices,
of anodal motion
scurrilous loci
modeled as diploid.
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Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Yet another poem displays your poetic prowess, my friend. Work of art!
Hind Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 5:35 PM
This is so dark, that it made me feel dark. Cutting imagery, powerful diction...
One Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 12:15 PM
This is a beautiful masterpiece with outstanding imagery portrayed through the wonders of your quill my friend..
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 8:32 AM
I enjoyed this multidimensional majesty. Always a pleasure to read your pieces. Happy new year.
Empress Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 1:04 AM
Ah Dr sotto, this is brilliant I absolutely love how you started the poem with such captivating alliterations and how your poem flows with colors and descriptive lines in the form of free verse. You do free verse too so well and your lines are so creatively crafted. I especially love “ ineffable wonder cradled by melodic hums and buzzes of lazy heat“ i love the word ineffable always and to see your use of it here in such an eloquent manner is truly impressive. The ending depicts darkness so well.
Rodgers Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Sotto’s your poem is a beautiful and evocative piece of art. The imagery of the burgundy and coniferous ravines, the melodic hums and buzzes, and the echoes of choral chants is so vivid and enchanting. The poem is a testament to your talent and creativity, and I’m sure it will inspire many others to explore the beauty of nature and music. - Blessings, Daniel
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 8:28 PM
Im admiring your poetic vocab and terms in this abstract muse you've inked so fab. i love the mention of rosary and sonata sounds cool. kudos! plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Baker Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 4:33 PM
A sonata of an evening brings many different sounds and moods to us. Your imagery brings a picture of such detail, it brings up so many different feeling and emotions like a sonata. Excellent poetry, my friend. Have a great 2024! Bill
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