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Evening Shower

A lovely landscape, Glistening crystal dew drops, In the moonlights glow. Listen, hear them sing? ping-pinging on the gutters; dancers on harp strings.

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/25/2019 10:40:00 AM

Great imagery and onomatopea

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/26/2019 4:21:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it; thanks so much.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/11/2019 1:56:00 PM

Lovely image M.L. Tom.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 8:57:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tom.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/11/2019 7:25:00 AM

I hear them..dancers on harp strings..so well said!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/11/2019 5:39:00 AM

just beautiful!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 1:15:00 PM

Thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/11/2019 5:13:00 AM

So harmonious...dearest MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 1:15:00 PM

I amglad, thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2019 1:48:00 AM

I immediately felt the dancers, and heard the pings. When I glanced to the title I was relieved I was right, but also saddened that my guesses were over. This one had a lovely feel.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 2:07:00 AM

I'm glad it felt lovely. Many thanks.