Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

Evening of Romance

tunes in  ecstasy
     claim juicy play of romance
            when twilight lips meet…
intoxicated by love
      under blushed stars, exploding!


Romance In The Night
Nayda Ivette Negron Contest   8/1/2016

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Paul Callus August 3, 2016 at 3:29 PM Beautiful and sensually romantic, Nette! Love and wine often happen to cross paths under the stars...they offer a blend of passionate intoxication! Congrats on this high flying win:) hugs // paul

Eve Roper August 2, 2016 at 8:54 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight August 2, 2016 at 3:52 PM Nette, congratulations on your nice placement in this 'romance in the night' Premiere Contest. Wonderful romantic imagery. Hugs, Sandra

Tom Arnone August 2, 2016 at 2:18 PM Those words make my mouth all wet and thirsty! Congrats on your Placement! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon August 2, 2016 at 11:39 AM Nice write and congrats on your win. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi August 2, 2016 at 6:44 AM Your poem has an aroma of romance!! Congrats Nette, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Eve Roper August 1, 2016 at 9:17 PM So sweet enticing :-) good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 1, 2016 at 8:00 PM Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest

Harry Horsman August 1, 2016 at 5:27 PM Now i know why i cannot win a contest anymore, when i'm up against poetry like this, nette. truly amazing tankas

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2016 at 4:18 PM great images of romance, Nette. Loved it.

Tom Quigley August 1, 2016 at 1:52 PM Beautiful write!

Madhupriya Shanmugam August 1, 2016 at 10:20 AM so romantic;) enjoyed your write which took to me to a dream land..

Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2016 at 7:11 AM - Beautiful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - Have a nice month! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam August 1, 2016 at 3:59 AM Excellent. Lovely romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

James Peranteau July 31, 2016 at 8:28 PM Tisshh! Fandamtastic my fear poet! Yikes girly.....I'm dumbfounded... Love what the nectar exposes..**smiles...have a wonderful night nette...much love, james

Liam Mcdaid July 31, 2016 at 7:43 PM very beautifully painted piece nette wishing you a blessing of a week pal

Daniel Turner July 31, 2016 at 7:28 PM How romantic you are, nette and how romantic you write. Kiss kiss!

Norma Arana July 31, 2016 at 6:57 PM Sprinkled with honey and wine. The taste of sensuality invites through your grade A poem!

Casarah Nance July 31, 2016 at 5:23 PM Romance in tasty bloom :) :)

Jan Allison July 31, 2016 at 5:17 PM a sizzling write Nette:-) hugs jan xx