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Evening Haiku

Taste of the moonlight As the city begins to dream Sorrow disappears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/24/2014 2:38:00 PM
Moonlight touches the emotions...for some sorrow disappears, for others it increases. Moonlights pulls the strings. // paul
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Date: 11/1/2014 2:43:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..I haven't seen you around in awhile..Sara
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Date: 10/28/2014 11:41:00 PM
I like it a lot, but probably it is not the kind of haiku that the haiku society would deem as true haiku because you inserted an emotion into it. From what i understand, the haiku writer cannot make judgments about sad, happy, etc. Just present picture of something. But some of them do not even like metaphor and I love that , like when you say Taste of moonlight. Well, you asked my opinion. I love the first two lines.
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Date: 10/28/2014 2:35:00 PM
Yes, that old moon...she does wonderful things for us.
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Date: 10/28/2014 12:23:00 PM
- Lovely haiku, Matthew ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2014 9:10:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Excellent haiku! Pandita
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Date: 10/28/2014 1:55:00 AM
Great haiku Matt! ;) xxxx D.
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