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Evening Exercise

Spider’s exercise
Abseiling down silken threads
Moonlight casts shadows

28th September 2015

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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September 29, 2015 at 5:01 PM

Yes they do go down at night, and they come from the oddest places. Have a great evening. One more to read.

September 29, 2015 at 5:06 PM

Seems this is the time of year they come into our houses and there has been a warning about people being bitten by false black widows - will be on spider alert now:-( hugs jan xx

September 29, 2015 at 10:47 AM

This is an amazing haiku my very dear friend, Jan. I'm so happy to read it tonight. I enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your visit and congratulatory comments on my poem. Have a blessed day! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

September 29, 2015 at 1:57 PM

Thanks Leonora I never know if I have written a proper haiku I just write and hope for the best:-) hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

September 29, 2015 at 1:51 AM

What a lovely imagery depicted in your. Brilliant write.............A.M.

September 29, 2015 at 9:19 AM

Thanks Afolabi:-) hugs jan xx

September 29, 2015 at 12:31 AM

Nice imagery Jan.

September 29, 2015 at 1:41 AM

Thanks Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

September 28, 2015 at 8:57 PM

Lovely visual Jan

September 29, 2015 at 1:41 AM

Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

September 28, 2015 at 6:11 PM

this is very beautiful, sweet friend!

September 29, 2015 at 1:41 AM

Thanks Andrea I appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx

September 28, 2015 at 3:47 PM

lovely mix of images ( spider, threads, moonlight0 for this great 'ku, jan...much enjoyed!.. huggs

September 28, 2015 at 3:49 PM

Thanks Nette I do appreciate your feedback:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 28, 2015 at 3:29 PM

This is marvelous and very imaginative dear, Jan! A seven!

September 28, 2015 at 3:45 PM

Thanks Demetrios the image came to mind and the haiku followed:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

September 28, 2015 at 2:03 PM

Jan, a beautiful visual haiku, a lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in response ....

September 28, 2015 at 2:12 PM

Thanks so much Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 28, 2015 at 1:14 PM

7 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

September 28, 2015 at 1:21 PM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 28, 2015 at 1:13 PM

- A wonderful evening... with silk threads and moonlight, dear Jan :) - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

September 28, 2015 at 1:20 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

September 28, 2015 at 1:11 PM

:) I don't like spiders, but this is a lovely haiku. hugs

September 28, 2015 at 1:20 PM

Nor do I Eileen but the image popped into my head and the haiku appeared:-) hugs jan xx

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