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Evening Exercise

Spider’s exercise Abseiling down silken threads Moonlight casts shadows 28th September 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Duke Beaufort
Date: 9/29/2015 5:01:00 PM
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Yes they do go down at night, and they come from the oddest places. Have a great evening. One more to read.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 5:06:00 PM
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Seems this is the time of year they come into our houses and there has been a warning about people being bitten by false black widows - will be on spider alert now:-( hugs jan xx
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 10:47:00 AM
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This is an amazing haiku my very dear friend, Jan. I'm so happy to read it tonight. I enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your visit and congratulatory comments on my poem. Have a blessed day! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 1:57:00 PM
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Thanks Leonora I never know if I have written a proper haiku I just write and hope for the best:-) hugs Jan xx
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/29/2015 1:51:00 AM
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What a lovely imagery depicted in your. Brilliant write.............A.M.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 9:19:00 AM
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Thanks Afolabi:-) hugs jan xx
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/29/2015 12:31:00 AM
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Nice imagery Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 1:41:00 AM
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Thanks Michael:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 9/28/2015 8:57:00 PM
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Lovely visual Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 1:41:00 AM
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Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/28/2015 6:11:00 PM
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this is very beautiful, sweet friend!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 1:41:00 AM
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Thanks Andrea I appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/28/2015 3:47:00 PM
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lovely mix of images ( spider, threads, moonlight0 for this great 'ku, jan...much enjoyed!.. huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 3:49:00 PM
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Thanks Nette I do appreciate your feedback:-) Hugs jan xx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2015 3:29:00 PM
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This is marvelous and very imaginative dear, Jan! A seven!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 3:45:00 PM
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Thanks Demetrios the image came to mind and the haiku followed:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 9/28/2015 2:03:00 PM
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Jan, a beautiful visual haiku, a lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in response ....
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 2:12:00 PM
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Thanks so much Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2015 1:14:00 PM
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7 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 1:21:00 PM
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Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2015 1:13:00 PM
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- A wonderful evening... with silk threads and moonlight, dear Jan :) - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 1:20:00 PM
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Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2015 1:11:00 PM
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:) I don't like spiders, but this is a lovely haiku. hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2015 1:20:00 PM
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Nor do I Eileen but the image popped into my head and the haiku appeared:-) hugs jan xx

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