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Evening Delight

Ring, ringing evening bells - cast me in your spell. Fly, flying cloudy shells - dizzy me as you swell. Each be of same intent, flashing quick, never spent. Chimes, shapes and sky all compel my joy so well. Grow, growing vivid color - fill emotions corridor. Bloom, blooming petal valor - gift me gentle furor. Each be as the other, yet always unlike another. Your palette grants pure blur in one, united purr. Sense, sensing all these scenes before evening pulls her screen.

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Date: 4/9/2018 1:54:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, CayCay.
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Date: 2/28/2018 2:47:00 PM
Another fine work CayCay, congratulations...
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:53:00 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your great win with a lovely Couplet.
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Date: 2/25/2018 6:14:00 PM
Caycay, I think I visited this one before we became such great friends. I am SO thrilled for you that you got a win with Brian. I did not, but one just never knows what will happen entering one of his contests. YOU picked well this time. Congrats to you for THAT. and also, it is a worthy win.
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:24:00 PM
LOVELY! Congrats, CayCay! Janice
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Date: 10/8/2015 2:00:00 AM
Awesome write Caycay! Congrats on big win!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:52:00 PM
Hi, again, Upma - You are so consistently kind and attentive. I am impressed by your generosity, thank you ... CayCay
Date: 10/3/2015 3:37:00 PM
enjoyed the rhythm of this piece that utilized all 3 senses fully, cay.. sweet congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, for sponsoring the contest. If not for you, I wouldn't have written this poem, it would never have been born and that makes you a positive life changer! Again, thank you ... CayCay
Date: 10/3/2015 9:00:00 AM
Such a lovely poem, CayCay, filled with mixed senses as evening draws near. I love the imagery you paint with your words. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Hugs, Sandra
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:55:00 PM
It thrills me that you shared your 'poem enjoyment.' What poet could ask for anything more (well, money - laugh). Seriously, I thank you very much ... CayCay
Date: 10/3/2015 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this unique and lovely poem CayCay!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Connie - I appreciate your congrats very much ... CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 10:55:00 PM
CayCay, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 1:00:00 PM
There you are! Thank you volumes, Skat ... CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 8:53:00 PM
CayCay great win!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, Michael. CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful write!!!!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:59:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you, Eve ... CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 4:28:00 PM
A most delightful mix of senses, CayCay, to be enjoyed at end of day. ~ Congratulations on a merited win! // paul
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:51:00 PM
Hi, Paul. Please accept my apologies for this tardy thanks. I couldn't appreciate your words more and have no idea how I overlooked them. You are kind and appreciated by me, know that ... CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 4:24:00 PM
awesome win, CayCay. BIG congrats to you.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/8/2015 12:49:00 PM
And a BIG thank you to you, Andrea. Hugs ... CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 3:44:00 PM
beautiful imagery and I love the clever alliteration:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/8/2015 12:48:00 PM
Somehow the kind comments on this page escaped my notice. My bad. Thank you, Jan, for your congrats and for the hug ... CayCay
Date: 10/2/2015 2:53:00 PM
Awesome placement CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 9/25/2015 4:18:00 PM
Dear CayCay A poem filled with on screen passion, I hope you place well in the contest, love the imagery and well thought work of poetry, thank you for your visit to my site, the word is by the handicapible and thanks again, cheri
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:56:00 PM
'Handicapible' gives me much thought, such a positive expression. I always appreciate you and your comments. Thank you, Cherl ... CayCay
Date: 9/18/2015 1:05:00 PM
Great way to describe an evening delight, CayCay. YOU are a delight here!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2015 1:13:00 PM
You know it means a lot to me when you come by and comment. I am sure you are composing your own delight for the contest. I look forward to reading it ... CayCay
Date: 9/16/2015 7:38:00 PM
I agree with Mark. Lovely images to tug at our hearts.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2015 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment, Dan. I appreciate you very much ... CayCay
Date: 9/15/2015 6:53:00 PM
Lovely scene, stunning imagery.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2015 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your response, especially since your words are exactly what my ears wanted to hear ... CayCay

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